Is there a length requirement for this?
You have the beginnings of a strong essay.
Answer the following questions:
Enrolling in to cosmetology is a biggest accomplishment for me that I am proud of
1. How is it a big accomplishment?
2. Why does it make you proud?
Right after high school I entered the work force not really thinking about the future.
3. What kind of person were you ten years ago? How have you changed?
I have spent the past couple of years thinking about my passion in life and always come back to cosmetology.
4. Why cosmetology as opposed to, say, fashion design. In other words, why THIS career?
As I got older I started wanting a career.
5. In your mind, what's the difference between a job and a career?