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I still remember his glowing face!; Recommendation letter from Professor


uddin84 1 / 2  
Dec 14, 2012   #1
Dear Forum Members and Moderators,

Please help me in correcting this reference letter of mine student

Subject: Student recommendation

Dear Sir,

Today, I am feeling pleasure to recommend one of my brilliant students for admission at your esteemed university.

First time, I met with Mr. XXXX in January 2006 at the reception ceremony given to students who has topped in MBA admission test. I still remember his glowing face with proud and sense of achievement. I consider, Mr. XXX to be a different, inquisitive, social mind with optimistic nature. He was a special student because of his inquisitive and correlating nature to relate concepts of business with social, economic issues and ordinary citizenry. In class, he always had thought-provoking comments such as how foreign direct investment influence development in rural parts of country. Especially his grip on socioeconomic problems of Pakistan, history and politics was outstanding. I observed that he always seek out for societal aspect of most of stuff that he encountered. Sometimes; I think that he should have been in social sciences. Over the course of his stay at Institute, he had shown tremendous growth and development; this development came not only in the area of business achievements, but also in maturity and character as well.

XXX kept himself distinguished in Institute of Business Administration due to his interactive and positive attitude in academic and extracurricular activities. He had exemplary grades throughout his MBA and maintained very good GPA. He secured highest marks in his class in Financial Accounting, Organizational Behavior and Business Internship. Which earned him applauds and recognition in department. His performance in group projects and assignments was very good; especially his ability to take the lead in group presentations was very inspiring for his class mates. In extracurricular activities he was always on forefront in organizing events like cultural gatherings, student debates and picnics that really made him heart winner. Personally I like his volunteering nature to serve others. He volunteered in fund raising campaign to support students from flood affected areas. This was I think great effort by a student.

Overall he was fine a student and I would rate him in top 5% students of the class. I appreciate his decision of continuing higher education. In fact, this is the best suited time for going to the top rank university because he has gained enough professional experience to move upward. Therefore I strongly recommend him for admission and appreciate your most favorable considerations to his application.

Yours Sincerely,
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Dec 14, 2012   #2
Today, I am feeling pleasure to recommend one of my brilliant students for admission at your esteemed university.

It is with my great pleasure that I recommend xxxxxxx who is one of my outstanding students for admission at your esteemed university.

First time, I met with Mr. XXXX in January 2006 at the reception ceremony given to students who has topped in MBA admission test. I still remember his glowing face with proud and sense of achievement.

I first met xxxx in 2006 at the reception organized for the students who topped the MBA admission test. My first impression about him as a young enthusiastic individual with talents in abundance, remained intact up todate.
OP uddin84 1 / 2  
Dec 15, 2012   #3
dumi
Thanks Dumi for your feedback. What about rest of text.... is that OK
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Dec 15, 2012   #4
Hi,

What about rest of text.... is that OK

Well... I feel it's worth trying to improve : )

He was a special student because of his inquisitive and correlating nature to relate concepts of business with social, economic issues and ordinary citizenry. In class, he always had thought-provoking comments such as how foreign direct investment influence development in rural parts of country. Especially his grip on socioeconomic problems of Pakistan, history and politics was outstanding. I observed that he always seek out for societal aspect of most of stuff that he encountered. Sometimes; I think that he should have been in social sciences. Over the course of his stay at Institute, he had shown tremendous growth and development; this development came not only in the area of business achievements, but also in maturity and character as well.

I find this part a bit messy. It does not really reveal his skills and capabilities in a strong way. Also I don't find a good flow there. I think you don't have to be too descriptive and detailed. But what you need is to pick his strengths and tell them straight. Hope you got my point : )

Also you can refer to some of the recommendation letters that had been posted to this forum to get an idea.
OP uddin84 1 / 2  
Dec 15, 2012   #5
Thanks for prompt response. I will redraft it and share improved version


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