mohamed nawaz 2 / 3 Oct 7, 2011 #1Please some one correct me the mistakes of the letter below.Dear sir,I am writing this letter to request for exemption for the subjects i have studied in my diploma. i have studied 9 (nine) modules in the diploma. As a part of my carrier development i am intending to enroll in Bachelor of business administration (hons) degree program that you college is currently conduting. further, i have 15 years of experience in the office enviornement.Herewith i am enclosing syllabus of all the modules with certificates.Yours, sincerelymohamed.
EF_Susan - / 2,364 12 Oct 8, 2011 #2I am writing this letter to request for exemption for the subjects I have studied for my diploma.I have studied 9 (nine) modules in the diploma.As a part of my career development I ---Always capitalize 'I'!---am intending to enroll in Bachelor of business administration (hons) degree program that your college is currently conducting .F urther, I have 15 years of experience in the office environment.Herewith i am enclosing a syllabus of all the modules with certificates.Good luck with school and have fun!:)