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Letter of motivation for a master's degree in petroleum engineering



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Author: bahri
   
Jan 29, 2010, 10:12am   #1
here is my letter of motivation for a master's degree in petroleum engineering. Please review. I would appreciate your comments and suggestions.

thank you for your help

Dear Sir, Madam

Extremely interested of oil industry and seduced by your prestigious institute, I am writing to you to pursue a master's degree in petroleum engineering. I am a last year engineer student of the National School of Engineers of Sfax (ENIS) and I would like to become a qualified petroleum engineer.
During my university education, I started paying more attention to the energy needs of our planet and realized the increasing reliance of humanity on oil and its products. And I think that the demand for safe, affordable, clean energy is increasing constantly. All these reasons solidify my desire to become a successful petroleum engineer to make a difference in the world.
The missions I am particularly passionate in are examining the production potential of deposits as well as technical means to implement to maximize recovery rates.
As a future graduate of Electrical Engineering, I have acquired a science-engineering program emphasizing math, chemistry, and physics which provides the necessary background for petroleum engineering. Practically bilingual, I also have a very good level in English and a working knowledge of German.
While waiting to meet you to explain more my motives, please accept, Madam, Sir, the assurances of my highest consideration.
Sincerely,



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Author: Debora Chacon
   
Jan 29, 2010, 11:34am   #2
While waiting to meet you to explain more my motives, please accept, madam, sir, the assurances of my highest consideration.

I would take that out...but overall its a good letter. :)


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Author: bahri
   
Jan 29, 2010, 02:44pm   #3
Thanks a lot. I appreciate your suggestion.


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Jan 30, 2010, 10:34am   #4
Extremely interested of in the oil industry and seduced by especially in the opportunities available through your prestigious institute, I am...

During my university education, I started paying more attention to the energy needs of our planet and realized the increasing reliance of humanity on oil and its products. ------ this is a great sentence!

I think that t The demand for safe, affordable, clean energy is increasing constantly. All these reasons This truth solidifies my desire to become a successful petroleum engineer to make a difference in the world.
The missions about which I am particularly passionate include are examining the production ...

While waiting to meet you to explain more about my motives, please accept, Madam, Sir, the assurances of my highest consideration. ------- awesome! Well done. I like the way you included "Madam, Sir"

You'll do very well!!


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Author: bahri
   
Jan 30, 2010, 03:48pm   #5
thanks a lot for the modifications.This is very helpfull. But I feel that ther is something missing may be I should add more details about my skills (to convince them of choosing me and not someone else ) and about the master programme that I want to attend which is Reservoir Geoscience and Engineering.
what do you think
I appreciate your suggestions.




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