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'your advertisement for a weekend job' - Improve my letter


isabella93 1 / 1  
Aug 24, 2012   #1
You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around your city.
Write a letter of application to the tourism office. In the letter:
- give your reasons for wanting the job
- explain why you think you can do the job
- describe any relevant experience you have
(at least 150 words)

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have just seen your advertisement for a weekend job as local tour guide. I feel I am right for this job as I have been always been interested in local history, cultural sites, famous scenery and even as a chid I have started to read many books about our glorious history. Your agency has a good reputation and it be my pleasure if I were part of it.

As you have already seen in the first section of this application, I have all qualifications relevant to this job and I have just received a diploma in Travel and Tourism. In addition, I used to work as a volunteer guide in tourist guides club of my university.

Due to all the above reason, I think I would done this work well. I am looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely,

Isabella

My writing skill is very very bad. And this is the first time I've post a thread in this forum. Hope that you can help me. Many thanks :)
ah_zafari [Contributor] 40 / 672 148  
Aug 24, 2012   #2
First of all your essay contains 138 words, while you must write at least 150 words.

I have just seen your advertisement

u can use this statement :"I am writing with reference to your advertisement...". In order to make the letter more realistic you can mention the name of the newspaper at which u have seen the advertisement.

I feel I am rightmatch

it would be my pleasure if Ito be awere part of it.

volunteer guide in tourist guides club of my university.

elaborate on this part. What is the name of your university? What was your responsibility? Talk more about your experience.

I am looking forward to your reply.

----> suggestion:"I am eagerly waiting for your kind reply and really appreciate your time and concern
OP isabella93 1 / 1  
Aug 24, 2012   #3
ah_zafari
Really thank you :). It's very helpful for me. :D
Msx punk 2 / 15  
Aug 24, 2012   #4
Great essay... Couldn't find out much mistakes as I'm just 13!! HEHE :D...
Anyways, u didn't mention your name, and it should be Due to all the above reason, I think I can do this work very well. I am looking forward to or (reply) your reply.

HOPE THIS WORK'S :P
sharonyip 1 / 2  
Aug 25, 2012   #5
I have just seen your advertisement for a weekend job as local tour guide.
I came across the vacancy for the post from the Times dated 5th February 2012. I have attached with this letter, certified true copies of all my certificates and references for your perusal.

In addition, I used to work as a volunteer guide in tourist guides club of my university .
Since my graduation, I used to works as a volunteer guide in tourist guides club of my university. My nature of job include __________.


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