Good evening.
Because you are assuming (as you did here) that everyone attends "church" and that may not be the case. Religion is a very sensitive topic, and a very wide one at that, so you do have to be careful of others' ideologies.
If you wish others to post their experiences, perhaps you could be more specific as to who "they" are. There are many different types of religious services, so you should be more specific.
Also, you need to discuss the fact that your research is not first hand, as you cannot go to church for whatever reason with your instructor so that he/she is informed as to how you are obtaining your research material.
Regards,
Gloria
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