LaDybLadE07 1 / - Feb 21, 2008 #1title of my research paper is Hansen's disease:Leprosy, a disease boughtby Mycobacterium lepraewould it be right if my thesis statement will be...thesis statement:among all the different kinds of bacterias mycobacterium leprae, an acid-fast rod and also an obligate intracellular organism gives birth to infectious disease known as leprosy.
EF_Team2 1 / 1,708 Feb 21, 2008 #2Greetings!Your thesis statement is quite a mouthful! :-) It might be better to simplify it just a little; you can explain in the following sentences that it is "an acid-fast rod and also an obligate intracellular organism." How about something like this: Among the many different kinds of bacteria, there is only one which brings the misery of the infectious disease known as leprosy: mycobacterium leprae.Remember that "bacteria" is plural and "bacterium" is singular; more than one bacterium equals bacteria.I'll look forward to reading more. :-)Thanks,Sarah, EssayForum.com