John Smith and Mary Rowlandson are examples(maybe you do not need to add the plural)
of the first real Americans because they are successful, heroic, and inventive. They are used to be a country what do you mean in this sentence with the structure to be used to + verb -ing? they- people can not be a country??..
that most of the world looked up to. People are inspired to be American because John Smith and Mary Rowlandson were truly to have shared their own personal journals and life that people can look forward to read about. They should be proud of celebrate celeberating
the American people whose who
big honor of/by
the traditional way of life and showing of love. They represented the best example of being honest with these kinds of expectations which
can be loyal and new experiences. People admired the these two famous American (you indicate to people who they are that you have said)
two famous American because they have paved the way to a land of freedom and have given freedom of choices. People admired the these
famous artists in many ways I can understand this sentence like that: the two verbs 'admired' and 'survived' go with the subject 'People' so if it were you need to add a linking word (and)
even survived their experiences as American.
John Smith and Mary Rowland became those
of the first most successful people in the colonies known as the past 300 years. They were more important to the success and survival; their lives realize realized, really? the beginning as much stronger people (what do you mean?)
. John Smith and Mary Rowlandson's accomplishments were that they never give up on their own beliefs. Their narrative of the captivity stores of people believed this success is mostly the result of their challenging. The actions of John Smith and Mary Rowlandson demonstrate how they were fighting for their lives to save the freedoms.
In addition, John Smith and Mary Rowlandson were heroic people who
were the first
whose have made to make/have made
American culture what is today. They have become heroic people in American history because they encountered the dangerous events due to the new day that they wanted to start in this new world. They found themselves something to life whose lived through their eventful life (did you mean to live through their eventful lives so what were changed forever? Do you mean 'they found themselves something to live their eventful lives which were changed forever?)
were changed forever because they exemplified the American hero to make the best of their civilizations. However, as John Smith and Mary Rowlandson found their hearts about time to runaway as....run away + [b]Clause- is this after sentence --->[/b]
. They found their way over exaggerated the harsh of the Indians and they are the heroic rescue of the captivity. John Smith and Mary Rowlandson fulfilled the heroic roles of both the New England and the colonial American woman.
and Mary Rowlandson -people
were the first of to verb
the most inventive journals -things
in colonial history of time that they want wanted
to prove people their journals were fantastic. They have purposes for their writings for their life and journals. John Smith and Mary Robinson only keep the journals and wrote something down everyday more more everyday
like see seeing
their lifestyle narrator of the story that can be proved with facts. However,
they finally realized that they could be expected to write the mixed feeling with emotion stories.
Finally, the first 300 years of the general history American American history
for many things mean to be American became John Smith and Mary Rowlandson were the first people to be successful as the "New World". you can not use three verbs in one sentence without linking word
They were inspired by
people ever even
more and made their heroic history back in the world. John Smith and Mary Rowlandson wrote the most inventive ways that make sense to people. These characteristics of successful people
are the perfect example of
role model for people. The time of their lives Their lifetime
and their point of view must be mentioned what were important in their characteristics can be a helpful tool in the world today.Dear ramonalford. These are some my suggestions. Hope it can help you. Your idea is good and you can only correct some sentences which go with structures.You can rewrite this essay after adding and correcting. I am also practing writing English so here you can consult. Wish you a good health, success and a happy life!