ludowici tammy 1 / - Feb 22, 2008 #1This is what I have can you help me out?TrustTrust is the color of blue.It sounds like a frienship of true.It taste like the salt from the sea.It smells like a fresh morning breeze.Trust makes me feel like there will always be someone there for me.
EF_Team2 1 / 1,708 Feb 22, 2008 #2Greetings!I think you have a good start! I like the first line especially. However, I think the next one needs some work (besides the spelling, which I corrected): "It sounds like a friendship of true." That doesn't really make any sense, and even though you are being metaphorical, there needs to be enough truth in the words to make your reader relate to what you are saying. Try this line again; perhaps it could sound like some type of music. Or the ringing of a bell. Does the poem have to contain rhyme? If so, perhaps "The sound of a dove's quiet coo."I hope this helps!Thanks,Sarah, EssayForum.com
ogmudbone - / 1 Mar 26, 2012 #3Coming up with a good Sense Poem?Hi I am trying to come up with a good sense poem for my essay can anyone help?
ScholarOnLife23 - / 2 Apr 3, 2012 #4Common SenseCommon Sense is necessityWhen I think of her, I seeOf all the senses that make meShe makes me sight realityCommon Sense cannot failNo matter the time or veilwhich blinds me, it hailsa goodness which cannot failCommon Sense is Wisdom oldIt came from the ancientsSocrates, Aristotle, and PlatoPerception or Reason in good senseYou weren't being specific enough. Give me a sample or an idea of what you are wanting me to write about or on. ( This way I will have a good focus.) If this is going in the essay, that is.