Very nice intro!!!
When time passes, things are forgotten. People who have achieved greatest successess
off into the ground.
Use a question mark:But what if soon after their peak of glory they die?
Would the memory of them remain at the same? In the poem " To an Athlete Dying Young" by A.E. Houseman the ...
Oh, so they carried him in victory, and they carried his casket in death.
Here is the correct way to quote in " " marks:
In the third stanza the narrator says, "Smart lad to slip betimes away from fields
where glory does not stay," which basically says that it was good
for him to die early because if he
had lived on the townspeople who once admired him would have soon forgotten him.