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can u tell me if my poem is any gd.
I can see across the tropical sea,
the wonderful landscapes stand out behind the sea,
in the landscapes I can see the steep jagged mountains.
I can smell the fresh air,
in the air there was a hint of fruit from the trees.
as I turned my head I could smell fish and chips.
I could taste the delightfulness of the fruit,
as I swam in the sea I could taste the salty water.
As I stood on the beach I could hear seagulls screeching,
as I swam the dolphins were singing.
In the background there was the roaring of the near by waterfall.
I could touch tropical plants.
The water was warm.
and that was my trip to the beach.
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