either take out this bit or incorporate somewhere else
I understand what Mark means, but in some classes the teacher requires a bit of explanation first. So, it all depends on what the teacher requires.
You can say "more... than" or "the same amount... as"
I want to try to fix this sentence:
He has come to realize that each road has the same amount of wear.
than the other. ---This makes more sense, now, but is it really what you are trying to express?
Keep it in the present verb tense:
He decides to take the second road and thinks to himself that he can take ...
I like this part: There is no judgment from these paths, just lessons learned.