cornelia 1 / 4 Nov 3, 2010 #1can you please help me on my assessment entitled five senses poem.here is the formatline1: (an emotion or idea) is (one or two color)line2: it tastes like __________line3: it sounds like __________line4: it smells like __________line5: it looks like __________line6: it makes me feel __________please answer my assessment i need your help to do thisplease respond.tnx. .
auds 2 / 40 Nov 7, 2010 #3lol, aren't you supposed to have already done this urself and we would critique it?! but I will take a crack at it, but im warning you, it may not be very good.Line1: I can paint a picture with my words is white (i chose white because that would be my canvas color) idk maybe it doesnt make sense.Line2: It tastes like the different flavors of SkittlesLine3: It sounds like Billie Holiday singing to me on a rainy afternoonLine4: It smells like freshly brewed coffee on a Sunday morningLine5: It looks like it's everything I want it to beLine6: It makes me feel invincibleThis was actually really hard to do. I just wrote down the things that I liked. Hopefully this helps spark a eureka moment :)
OP cornelia 1 / 4 Nov 8, 2010 #4thank you for your responseat least i have an idea on what to do with mypoemtnx a lot
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129 Nov 13, 2010 #5Ha ha, nice job, Narothnee Jean-Pierre! I would change different to various.Good luck with this fun assignment, Cornelia! It is the kind of thing that is correct no matter how you complete the sentences. Just express yourself! :-)