Good afternoon. I have a few suggestions:
"I am determined and shy I wonder if I'll ever accomplish my goals I hear the owls hooting I see goods things ahead I want to help the unwealthy I am determined and shy
I pretend that the world is a perfect place to live in I feel like the world is looking down on unwealthy people I touch.... I worry ... I cry when I watch sad movies I am determined and shy
I understand that anything is possible I say.... I dream to become and interior designer in the future I try to get straight "A's" in my report card I hope ...... I am determined and shy"
This is the basic format for the "I am" poem:
I am (two special characteristics)
I wonder (something you are actually curious about)
I hear (an imaginary sound)
I see (an imaginary sight)
I want (an actual desire)
I am (the first line of the poem restated)
I pretend (something you pretend to do)
I feel (a feeling about something imaginary)
I touch (an imaginary touch)
I worry (something that really bothers you)
I cry (something that makes you very sad)
I am (the first line of the poem repeated)
I understand (something you know is true)
I say (something you believe in)
I dream (something you actually dream about)
I try (something you make an effort to do)
I hope (something you actually hope for)
I am (the first line of the poem repeated)
I hope this helps.
Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com
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