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critique for my "5 senses of your favorite color" poem Oh yeah, I see how that can cause confusion.	9	xynare Aug 26, 10, 10:32am	EF_Kevin Yesterday, 08:58am
Suggestions for my poem : "My Flight". kamalpaad: I wanted to know if I can continue posting my other poems in the same thread when written or...	9	kamalpaad Aug 9, 10, 05:44am	EF_Kevin Aug 14, 10, 04:29pm
Writing a Narrative Poem/Short Story Hey Goto124, You have chosen a very good topic for your poem. If you use your imagination, all the...	6	goto124 Aug 3, 10, 09:05am	kamalpaad Aug 10, 10, 07:59am
"Sorrow" - need feedbacks on poem Thanks! ))))	7	Azeri Jul 25, 10, 01:38pm	Azeri Jul 30, 10, 01:19pm
a poem of the senses + an acrostic poem - assignment on poems Too simple!! Easy for me to say when I don't have to write it. Let me be honest, though, and...	5	missy Jun 17, 10, 02:16am	EF_Kevin Jun 20, 10, 10:39am
Letter to a girl (need help with articulation) Hi, I agree that it is too wordy. I see that this is all about the "physical" relationship....	5	crazyman May 29, 10, 10:28pm	EF_Kevin May 31, 10, 03:03pm
Glass: My first Free Verse Poetry....your thoughts Smira Roberts: whether or not English is the only offical language in U.S The U.S. has no official language, because...	9	Smira Roberts May 21, 10, 06:06pm	EF_Kevin May 25, 10, 12:59pm
Chaos Into Fourteen Lines + Catch - Compareing and Contrasting two Poems Great advice! You can also start with a cluster of ideas -- what are the points of comparison that come...	2	fonzynator May 9, 10, 03:51pm	EF_Kevin May 11, 10, 09:20pm
Times Square: A description of my haiku? Simplicity and complexity spill into one another. I think it's cool that the nature of reality is like that....	8	alswn95 Apr 29, 10, 03:22pm	EF_Kevin May 8, 10, 01:57pm
Mirroring poetry This is an interesting assignment!! PLease please tell your teacher that Kevin at EssayForum admires her for this inspired exercise....	2	natalieerachel May 5, 10, 01:03am	EF_Kevin May 6, 10, 06:50pm
How is my analysis of The Road Not Taken by Robert Frost?? You should check out these figures of speech.. like... "unlock new path" is not quite right. "opportunity doors" is not...	6	alswn95 Apr 28, 10, 08:48pm	EF_Kevin May 6, 10, 06:15pm
"Damsel's Nightmare". What do you think about my limerick and the description? Nice!! it would be even better if it said: Caught swine on her way to Peru. That meter...	6	alswn95 Apr 29, 10, 12:29pm	EF_Kevin May 6, 10, 06:00pm
"On this autumn day" - My concrete poem along with the description I like your poem! The speaker (no comma here) is observing the last maple leaf lingering on its...	1	alswn95 May 4, 10, 07:38am	EF_Susan May 4, 10, 08:14pm
What if? - What do you think about my cinquain poem and my description? Well, you get to decide what case example will illustrate it best. Give a paragraph about a person who had...	3	alswn95 May 1, 10, 06:42pm	EF_Kevin May 4, 10, 05:11pm
Reminiscence of Childhood: Help with my messy paragraphs? Not that one. My free verse poem entitled, "Reminiscence About Childhood" is an eye-opener to one of the most...	4	alswn95 May 1, 10, 06:38pm	alswn95 May 4, 10, 07:41am
A poem about an unhappy woman Notoman , I think it's a bit unarranged. Though, thank you. It is a big help for me....	3	Aina Mar 23, 10, 02:36pm	Aina Apr 29, 10, 10:11pm
"Shall I compare thee to a summer's day" Pardoy This is such a great poem. I love how you changed Shakespeare poem into a contemporary poetry. Keep out the...	4	mbiscoe25 Apr 27, 10, 02:53pm	alswn95 Apr 29, 10, 12:31pm
Venus and Adonis poem, common characteristics? Thank you so much for your help as well as correcting my grammar still learning	2	MSNYCBRATTY Apr 21, 10, 06:29am	MSNYCBRATTY Apr 22, 10, 03:27pm
poem on war ZZsleepyZZ: a thousand thanks! I want 1,250 thanks, or the deal's off! amber-tinted what? The greens...	1	ZZsleepyZZ Apr 14, 10, 11:15pm	EF_Kevin Apr 16, 10, 11:07am
Five sense poem about an emotion Jealosy Jealousy smells like is the smell of a bittersweet summer romance. I like this ... in the face,...	6	nevaeh Apr 13, 10, 07:44pm	EF_Kevin Apr 15, 10, 11:55pm
My Five Senses Poem about Compassion: Any ideas/suggestions? :/ I think you can find a better feeling than kindhearted. I think the word "it" could be omitted so that...	3	Porkissimo Apr 12, 10, 09:10pm	EF_Kevin Apr 14, 10, 09:15pm
Billy Collin's "The Listener" I agree, it wuld be nice to have you post your own ideas. hat way it won't end up being...	2	ShawnS Apr 6, 10, 04:34pm	EF_Kevin Apr 7, 10, 09:40pm
sense of touch and sense of smell I loved the second one,but I disagree with the others,i think it should remain five fingers,because people write poems when...	5	MAC JR Mar 6, 10, 10:54pm	stranger4ever Apr 6, 10, 03:29pm
I Am (poem) Those are some nice ideas. I hope you will use your own ideas, though! The way to get ideas...	2	luvLifeB4itzGon Mar 30, 10, 04:03pm	EF_Kevin Apr 1, 10, 03:17pm
Idle musings of a museless idler. First stanza: awesome Second stanza: simplistic, but refreshingly simple, like a haiku Third stanza: "I Hated Grapefruits" seems like a...	1	diodotusX Mar 24, 10, 03:01am	EF_Kevin Mar 25, 10, 08:21pm
Anabell Lee vs How do I Love Thee - a compare/contrast poem One good strategy might be to learn a little about their lives and than argue that these aspects of their...	1	rpachec4 Mar 20, 10, 06:51pm	EF_Kevin Mar 21, 10, 06:52pm
Baby Doll, Phenomenal Woman - Comparing and contrasting two poems That is great advice. If you are a beginner, you should google what Sue told you to google and...	2	maddymad Mar 16, 10, 08:00pm	EF_Kevin Mar 18, 10, 08:34pm
Is my colour poem any good? If not, how would you fix it? (Colour: Red) Cool rhythm! I hope the reader reads it with an awareness of the rhythm I think you heard when writing...	2	PartyPants Mar 11, 10, 06:13pm	EF_Kevin Mar 12, 10, 06:25pm
Pain... nightmare I can only hope to awaken from. That cool I really like it. Thanks!	3	Stephy1096 Mar 10, 10, 08:02pm	Stephy1096 Mar 11, 10, 05:40pm
colours of love I love the way you captured the pain as well as the beauty of love.	2	BORE Feb 25, 10, 08:46am	Stephy1096 Mar 10, 10, 07:50pm
Down at the Beach -- at least 150 words yeah it is good now. i agree with kevin, the imagery is great!	5	md1411 Mar 3, 10, 09:51pm	knich6 Mar 8, 10, 08:44pm
Poem on 5 senses (dream theme) I also have to do a few sense poems so I will comment here: For your short Taste...	10	supergirl Jan 23, 10, 04:43pm	MAC JR Mar 6, 10, 10:25pm
"What You Should Have Given Me" hmm this is tight,the use of words is intruguing.the message is deep yet bright like that diamond.question are u ready...	2	missconniealice Feb 4, 10, 11:19pm	BORE Feb 16, 10, 02:17am
"Mirrored behaviors.", English 12 Essay Comparing Two Poems (for BC, Canada) I like it! I have not gone deep enough in studying these poems to know how accurate it is, but...	4	_fantasy Feb 10, 10, 01:31am	EF_Kevin Feb 13, 10, 03:18pm
analyse this poem -- walking in cluster of clouds Please spend a little more time helping other people. You only give one line of feedback! :-) Is...	3	BORE Feb 9, 10, 02:42am	EF_Kevin Feb 10, 10, 01:00pm
6,142 Feet - a poem of less than 8 lines that "best represents me" it is a nice poem but i dont feel it presenting yyou .is more of a an experirence you've...	8	NW15 Jan 15, 10, 05:19pm	BORE Feb 9, 10, 08:05am
Poetry on Parents and Immigration Thank you! Yes, I love your edits, Susan, and I completely agree, jjinko, it can definitely be improved; now, reading...	3	Envie Jan 30, 10, 02:21pm	Envie Feb 1, 10, 04:39pm
I will get what I desire. Well, poetry is good for introducing new expressions. BUT you have to find a way to demonstrate to the...	6	qomoco Jan 18, 10, 09:19pm	EF_Kevin Jan 25, 10, 06:24pm
Shinigami - Death God EF_Susan Thank you, that does make it sound more clear and fix the grammar error and keep the rhyme.	8	qomoco Jan 18, 10, 09:34pm	qomoco Jan 24, 10, 06:30pm
Water Poem Who is she, I wonder. I think this is a tough part: proclaims, for all to see----------- you...	2	MadisonUp Jan 22, 10, 02:25pm	EF_Kevin Jan 24, 10, 12:58pm
Limericks or poems. Started to like poetry... maybe qomoco: For I'm the petrified moth in desire. Awesome, you have great rhythm. A comedian does a few...	1	qomoco Jan 18, 10, 07:09pm	EF_Kevin Jan 19, 10, 07:04pm
First Stab at a Sonnet Jeannie the letters are the rhyming patterns I wrote two for my english class, how about read it and...	17	Jeannie Dec 17, 09, 12:56am	qomoco Jan 18, 10, 07:05pm
get out... poem I think you can say it is a life experience...	8	bilal ABUZENAH Jan 11, 10, 01:36pm	bilal ABUZENAH Jan 18, 10, 05:37pm
Mother Earth Poem-Revisions please? i would keep the the use of coplets throughout the poem	4	aguafria22 Dec 10, 09, 12:47pm	chuncky13 Jan 10, 10, 11:03pm
"Stepping out into the world" - NYU SUPPLEMENT POEM its really not that good. have u read what some others are using. its really terrible. please make it better....	3	Danielle123 Dec 24, 09, 03:10pm	smallick13 Jan 5, 10, 06:34pm
Various short poems- i wrote these poems last year for my English 3 honors class Actually, I just noticed that you did not give very much help to people yet; you certainly have the necessary...	2	hbsflute2010 Dec 23, 09, 06:56pm	EF_Kevin Dec 27, 09, 12:35pm
I have to compare and contrast 2-3 poems... Yes, start with the poem you understand the best. Google this: poetry analysis (title of poem) ... and read...	3	mannsbabygurl44 Dec 20, 09, 04:43pm	EF_Kevin Dec 22, 09, 04:35pm
HE WAS NOT A TEACHER.... Bilal, here is my challenge for you: If you do not already play the guitar, get one and use the...	6	bilal ABUZENAH Dec 16, 09, 10:15pm	EF_Kevin Dec 19, 09, 02:59pm
Poem about Nothing.... finally you knew it jeannie........	9	bilal ABUZENAH Nov 4, 09, 03:36pm	bilal ABUZENAH Dec 18, 09, 11:51am
A Poem about mac and cheese melb: Then one day its post was challenged The haughty french fry demanded hommage. It would not have dawned...	3	melb Dec 14, 09, 11:47am	Jeannie Dec 16, 09, 11:24pm
Beauty (poem) Sigh, really pretty. Is it "lay" or "lies??" <that one always gets me... I am trying to...	4	Juniper_Jumper Dec 10, 09, 12:24am	Jeannie Dec 16, 09, 10:59pm
The Barber (a very short poem that I wrote). NonSequitur: hope that makes sense. Well...yes, now that you gave me that lengthy explanation! Haha! Perhaps it is just...	7	NonSequitur Dec 3, 09, 06:09pm	Jeannie Dec 12, 09, 11:02pm
What do you think, Life Poem - Trying a new style I like it. But personally, I feel like this style of poetry does not give the reader enough 'meat' (if...	3	aguafria22 Dec 10, 09, 12:54pm	NonSequitur Dec 12, 09, 07:14pm
"On 'Virtue'" - a poem writing assignment for my Lit class DmitryK: Yet, if I don't try to make a poem rhyme from the onset, it just doesn't "feel" like a...	7	DmitryK Dec 3, 09, 08:21pm	Jeannie Dec 9, 09, 06:14am
poem about a thousand splendid suns ale: i am doing my poem about a thousand splendid suns! Well... you can't just post the requirements here...	2	ale Dec 2, 09, 01:41pm	EF_Kevin Dec 4, 09, 03:09pm
Am I getting the metrics?? Insomnia... Cast clues and rope, my one true hope is caught and in the reach my eye is pressed...	23	Jeannie Nov 2, 09, 01:18am	Jeannie Dec 3, 09, 06:57am
Poetry analysis paper (Academy of American Poets). Where to start? Google the Academy of American Poets and choose two poems, maybe two by the same poet, or two poems about...	1	TaniaMeyers Dec 1, 09, 09:05am	EF_Susan Dec 2, 09, 12:13pm
responding to a poem "Mountain Talk" let's see how you paraphrased it. If I read the way you paraphrased, will that have the same effect...	3	kokujampo1991 Nov 29, 09, 10:12pm	EF_Kevin Dec 1, 09, 05:01pm
Sonnets: Love & Hate (Italian and English) thank you both, this was my first time writing sonnets for my English class. Spent about 10 hours lol...	3	qomoco Nov 9, 09, 10:20pm	qomoco Nov 28, 09, 10:21pm
A Sonnet I Wrote For my Shakespeare class I love the way the poem flows when you say "time has chiseled me from a boy to a man"....	5	Notoman Oct 23, 09, 01:35am	work2009 Nov 26, 09, 03:00am

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