I have also chosen to do a cinquain, concrete and couplet poem as well as a poem about me and also one about a sense. This is what I have so far if you could look at them and give me any advice.
Developing, blossoming, flourishing,
Spring is finally here,
Rain, rain, keeps falling down,
and all around the children frown.
Sense poem - Happiness
the feeling you get when all goes right.
When you ge the sudden rush of energy from your success
and burst into dance.
The feeling you get when your mind
flows free from the dark clutches of sorrow,
when you are overcome by a sense of joy.
The feeling you get when you realise your
hard work and time have finally paid off.
When nothing can bring you down at that moment.
Being cut down
Slowly choking our planet.
Hundreds more as the days go by.
How much longer can this go on. Will we
Will we live to see