Hello I have an I am poem, and I was just wondering if you could help me to finish I really don't understand what to do. I started on it and hope you could give me suggustion.
I am determined and shy
I wonder if i'll ever accomplish my goals
I hear the owls hotting
I see goods things ahead
I want to help the unwealthy
I am determined and shy
...
please right soon its due on Friday .
Good afternoon. I have a few suggestions:
"I am determined and shy
I wonder if I'll ever accomplish my goals
I hear the owls hooting
I see goods things ahead
I want to help the unwealthy
I am determined and shy
I pretend that the world is a perfect place to live in
I feel like the world is looking down on unwealthy people
I touch...
I worry ...
I cry when I watch sad movies
I am determined and shy
I understand that anything is possible
I say...
I dream to become and interior designer in the future
I try to get straight " A's" in my report card
I hope ...
I am determined and shy"
This is the basic format for the "I am" poem:
I am (two special characteristics)
I wonder (something you are actually curious about)
I hear (an imaginary sound)
I see (an imaginary sight)
I want (an actual desire)
I am (the first line of the poem restated)
I pretend (something you pretend to do)
I feel (a feeling about something imaginary)
I touch (an imaginary touch)
I worry (something that really bothers you)
I cry (something that makes you very sad)
I am (the first line of the poem repeated)
I understand (something you know is true)
I say (something you believe in)
I dream (something you actually dream about)
I try (something you make an effort to do)
I hope (something you actually hope for)
I am (the first line of the poem repeated)
I hope this helps.
Regards,
Gloria
Moderator, EssayForum.com
but i was asking if you can tell what to put in the lines that i didn't completed in i cant think of anything
can you like give me what you can tell me in like the 4 lines i didn't right in i cant think of anything . what would you right for i say , i touch, i worry, and i dream dont know what to put in
I pretend that the world is a perfect place to live in
I feel like the world is looking down to unwealthy people
I touch...the window panes and see the glimmering goodies inside
I worry ...I may never have them, sometimes -- should I even try
I cry when im watching sad movies
I am determined and shy
I understand that anything is possible
I say...I too can do what I try
I dream to become and interior designer in the future
I try to get straight A's in my report card
I hope ...there isn't anything which will hold me back
I am determined and shy
Thank you Rajiv.
Regards,
Gloria
Moderator, EssayForum.com
.. my pleasure, Gloria.
Thanks.
