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Hello I have an I am poem, and I was just wondering if you could help me to finish I really don't understand what to do. I started on it and hope you could give me suggustion.

I am determined and shy
I wonder if i'll ever accomplish my goals
I hear the owls hotting
I see goods things ahead
I want to help the unwealthy
I am determined and shy


I pretend that the world is a perfect place to live in
I feel like the world is looking down to unwealthy people
I touch....
I worry ...
I cry when im watching sad movies
I am determined and shy

I understand that anyhting is possible
I say....
I dream to become and interior designer in the future
I try to get straight A's in my report card
I hope ......
I am determined and shy

Good afternoon. I have a few suggestions:

"I am determined and shy
I wonder if I'll ever accomplish my goals
I hear the owls hooting
I see goods things ahead
I want to help the unwealthy
I am determined and shy


I pretend that the world is a perfect place to live in
I feel like the world is looking down on unwealthy people
I touch....
I worry ...
I cry when I watch sad movies
I am determined and shy

I understand that anything is possible
I say....
I dream to become and interior designer in the future
I try to get straight "A's" in my report card
I hope ......
I am determined and shy"

This is the basic format for the "I am" poem:

I am (two special characteristics)


I wonder (something you are actually curious about)


I hear (an imaginary sound)


I see (an imaginary sight)


I want (an actual desire)


I am (the first line of the poem restated)


I pretend (something you pretend to do)


I feel (a feeling about something imaginary)


I touch (an imaginary touch)


I worry (something that really bothers you)


I cry (something that makes you very sad)


I am (the first line of the poem repeated)


I understand (something you know is true)


I say (something you believe in)


I dream (something you actually dream about)


I try (something you make an effort to do)


I hope (something you actually hope for)


I am (the first line of the poem repeated)

I hope this helps.

Regards,
Gloria
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can you like give me what you can tell me in like the 4 lines i didn't right in i cant think of anything . what would you right for i say , i touch, i worry, and i dream dont know what to put in
Sep 5, 2008, 02:04am   #
I pretend that the world is a perfect place to live in
I feel like the world is looking down to unwealthy people
I touch....the window panes and see the glimmering goodies inside
I worry ...I may never have them, sometimes -- should I even try
I cry when im watching sad movies
I am determined and shy

I understand that anything is possible
I say....I too can do what I try
I dream to become and interior designer in the future
I try to get straight A's in my report card
I hope ......there isn't anything which will hold me back
I am determined and shy



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