kawsneffect 8 / 37 Jan 19, 2012 #1Hi all,Basically the cover letter needs to include why i would be a good candidate for the job and what I hope to gain from the experience. Critiques, comments, improvements are all welcome. ThanksDear Meep intern recruiters,I am writing in response to the opening position for Museum Education and employment program summer internship.I believe my experience with customer service at my previous job, Keyfood will make me an ideal candidate for this opening. I'd like to think I am a humanitarian. I have worked with many customers on a day-to-day basis, am extremely patient & want nothing more than to see them walk out happy at the end of the day. I am punctual, responsible and I adapt to task relatively quick.The opportunity to be employed here will help better explore my field of interest before I am really to be fully committed. i hope to equipped the skills and knowledge i learn to my future careers.If given the opportunity to be apart of your program, I will establish myself to be a great asset for the team and for the business. I have attached my resume for your review. If you have any further questions or requests, feel free to contact me by email at ---------------- or by phone at ------------. Thank you for your consideration and I hope to hear from you in the coming weeks.Best regards,
EF_Susan - / 2,364 12 Jan 19, 2012 #2I believe my experience with customer service at my previous job at Keyfood, will make me an ideal candidate for this opening.I am punctual, responsible and I adapt to new tasks relatively quickly .The opportunity to be employed here will help me better explore my field of interest before I am ready to be fully committed.I hope to become equipped with the skills and knowledge i needfor my future careers .If given the opportunity to be a part of your program, I will establish myself to be a great ...Always capitalize your 'I's. Good luck with the job!:)
OP kawsneffect 8 / 37 Jan 20, 2012 #3ahhhh, my grammars are flawed. Thanks for the corrections, much appreciated. :)