abc1123581321 1 / 1 Mar 5, 2012 #1This is the email I'm using to introduce myself to potential PhD supervisors but haven't received any responses. Please review it.Best regards,QS________________________________________________________-Respected Dr. ***I am ***** and I'm applying for a PhD in the ***** of the ***** for spring ****. I am currently pursuing my MSc in ***** from ***** and have completed my under-graduation from ******, one of the most reputed engineering schools in *****. I am interested to work in the domain of ****** in the ******** Research Group during my doctoral studies.I'm currently working on devising a (100 word description of MSc project)For the thesis of my under graduate degree, we, our team of 4 members, (50 word description of BS project).Along with this, I am an active volunteer in *** at Europe, Middle East and Africa level, where I'm leading their effort, as ******, to encourage school students to join the engineering field. Recently, I've been nominated by the ******* for the ****** Award for my volunteer services.I am really excited to explore the opportunities for working in the ***** Research Group under your supervision and I am confident that I'll be able to make positive contribution to the group.Looking forward to your response.Yours Sincerely,*****
Athena - / 83 3 Mar 6, 2012 #2Hi,I think you should edit this:I am interested to in working work in the domain of ****** in the ******** Research Group during my doctoral studies.Cheers!