In the last sentence in paragraph 1, do you mean " he will make an excellent addition to your mastered study student roster"??
- Wayne, I mean exactly what I wrote, masteral degree. It is the correct term for a student taking up masters studies. Look it up :-) However, I noticed that this is for a PhD enrollment already so the term should not be masteral but instead Doctoral. So the sentence should read "He will make an excellent addition to your doctorate student roster." instead. Dcotorate is the correct term for a person taking up doctoral or PhD studies.xxxxxxx has the ability to work independently or collaboratively on designing experiments. Providing valuable assistance and advice whenever needed. One of my PhD students often worked with Hsiao-Lun on testing and constructing the high-speed measurement system such as the VCSEL eye-diagram demonstration, photodiode bandwidth calibration, as well as the device scattering parameters analysis . Ultimately, Hsiao-Lun's ability surpassed his peers and he provided excellent and caring guidance to my graduate students. Just one example was his assistance on the GaN LED electrical and optical microwave analysis where he proposed an idea to build up corresponding compact model by extracting the device resistance and capacitance.
- Do not provide information in your recommendation that the student should be presenting himself in his application essays. Just talk about him in general terms. That is all that is required from you.In short, xxxxxxxx is a very rare student. (Not many students, for example, publish two academy papers in just one year.) His combination of intelligence, commitment, perseverance and enthusiastic character will certainly make him a valuable member of the Ph.D program in your school. I encourage you to look favorably upon his application.
- Sentence about his academic papers being published should not be in a parenthesis. This is a major part of his quality as a student and should be highlighted instead of an afterthought. Take out the parenthesis and discuss and overview of the topic he discussed in the published work and why it impressed you.