Please kindly revise my first motivation letter for re-entry visa to Switzerland
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Chanya Lakana, I was born in Vientiane, Lao. Currently, I am studying a first year student, in Program Diploma in hospitality management at xxxx , Switzerland. I would like to continue my education in order to gain better knowledge and vision.
About 1 year I have learned in Switzerland, it made me become more mature and independent in every perspective. During my studies at xxxx, I have learned a great opportunity of experience that may guarantee success in my lifetime career.
Moreover, I had the improvement in socializing how to make a relationship with many people and language skills. And I am proud to be a student who is learning hospitality management subjects at xxx , one of the leading countries in hospitality schools. Switzerland is one of the world of career opportunities, whether viewed from the perspectives of economics, quality of life, most visited cities, cultures, tourism, and scenic Lake Lucerne. It was a marvelous experience and I had a great time both educationally and socially.
Upon I graduated, it is pretty certain that after 3 years of studying. That is done with constant discipline and my passion will be successful that I could have experienced enough to lead my family business. Xxxx , Switzerland will help me to reach my professional goals.
Thank you very much for your reply and advices
Hi chanya, I have got some suggestions for you and hope these can help you=)
I am a freshmenand I am studying Program Diploma in hospitality management at xxxx , Switzerland.
I have been studying in Switzerland for about 1 year .Studying there really made me become more mature and independent in every perspective.
I have learned some great opportunity ofexperienceswhich may guarantee me to get success in my lifetime career.
I had got the improvement in socializingon how to make a relationship with many people and language skills.
And I am proud to be a student who is learning hospitality management subjects at xxx , one of the most leading countries in hospitality schools.
Switzerland is one of the world ofcountry whichis full of worldwide career opportunities in the world.
I had a great time in both education and society .
Upon I graduated, it is pretty certain thatwhich is certainly after 3 years of studying,That is done with constant discipline and my passion(better to replace it with ambition) will besuccessas I could have got enough experience enough to lead my family business. In conclusion, I am sure that Switzerland will help me to reach my professional goals.
Thank you.(In letter, we usually use "thank you" for the last paragraph)
