I think you make some very good points in your letter! It can be a challenge to write in a language which is not your first language. I've made some grammar corrections for you. (Note to American students: the writer is using British English spellings):
I feel compelled to write this letter to relay my suspicion
that my neighbours treat their pets badly. I am writing to give details of the incidents of abuse that Iam
aware of and suggest some ways to help the pets with
their most urgent needs.
The first thing I noticed was
the strange smells and animal sounds that come from my next-door neighbours' house.
One month ago, my neighbours moved into
the place; then, I often could smell some bad odours
and hear many different kinds of animal sounds, including dogs', cat's, birds' and so on. Sometimes, the sounds are unbearable. It sounds as if they have been in their small cages without anything to eat for a long time.
The second thing making me suspicious is that my neighbours' house is often empty.
I only have seen the neighbours three times since they moved to the apartment. And I used to find them for their pet-noise nuisance, but in no time there is anyone there. What can the pets eat when there is no people to take care of them? I really doubt about it.
- This part does not really make grammatical sense, and also seems to be just restating things you have said before, so I would delete it.
I tried to contact the proprietor, but received no response. Then, I decided to ask
for your help. I think there are two viable measures you can take
to rescue the poor
Before anything else, you can send some inspectors to investigate the abuse. Being an animal-care society, you must have a more professional approach to tackle the problem as well as providing a more authorized suggestion to the government if it is necessary. I will be available if there is anything I can do to help
Moreover, you can contact the media, if necessary
. Therefore, the pets' owner
will realize the seriousness of the problem, though we may not be able to contact them. More importantly, the government may therefore resort to a quicker and more powerful measure, breaking into the door and seizing the cages, to cope with the cruelty. - I think you might be better off without this last sentence; you are speculating as to what the government might do.
The measures should be launched before it is too late. The animals will die if action is
not taken. All lives are equal. We must not watch them die without doing anything. It is barbarous to leave
pets with no food and in an over-crowded living space. Besides, the potential abusers may have violated animal welfare laws. The government should immediately take legal action, if so.
Finally, I hope that you will give
top priority to the potential abuse and take action on
the suggestions above to ensure the welfare of the pets. I think this is what your society really stands for, and I appreciate the work you do.
Thank you for your attention.
Best of luck in your studies!