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Cover Letter - enthusiasm and creativity, architecture internship.


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Dear Mr___________,

I am excited to apply for the internship position at .............. The internship program is scheduled from September 2011 to January 2012.

At the moment I am a second semester master student in Architecture and Design at Aalborg University, Denmark. Due to the international framework of my studies and Problem Based Learning approach that Aalborg University imposes, I appreciate it to work effectively in international teams and transform problems into challenging projects through critical thinking, creativity and innovativeness.

This internship is right for me at this stage of my development process because it fits my educational background, my continuing willingness to learn new things and represents a perfect chance to improve my skills. Furthermore, I am a quick learner, hard-working, ambitious person, motivated by goal achievements, having a multi-perspective approach towards a situation. Nothing provides me with more satisfaction than bringing contribution to the success of a project.

My technical knowledge, conceptual and architectural skills, combined with my enthusiasm and creativity make me a "must have" intern. Moreover, I would be positive contribution to your organization due to my international experience and my global mindfulness.

My resume and portfolio underlining my academic credentials are attached together with this application letter for your reference. Should you require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me any time.

Thank you for your time and consideration in reviewing my materials. I look forward to hearing the good news from you.

Sincerely,

May 2, 2011, 06:13am   #
Hi Andrei,

I added some minor suggestions. Hope it helps :)

I am writing in to apply for the internship position at .............. which is scheduled from September 2011 to January 2012.

I am currently a second semester master student in Architecture and Design at Aalborg University, Denmark. Due to the international framework of my studies and Problem Based Learning approach that Aalborg University imposes, I look forward to work in an international team and transform problems into challenging projects through critical thinking, creativity and innovativeness.

This internship is right (right doesn't seem the best word but I can't think of anything. Maybe perfect or beneficial?) for me at this stage of my development process as it fits my educational background, my continuing willingness to learn new things and represents a perfect chance to improve my skills. Furthermore, I am a quick learner, hard-working, ambitious person, motivated by goal achievements and have a multi-perspective approach towards a situation. Nothing provides me with more satisfaction than contributing to the success of a project.

My technical knowledge, conceptual and architectural skills, combined with my enthusiasm and creativity makes me a "must have" intern. Moreover, my international experience and global mindfulness would be a positive contribution to your organization.

My resume and portfolio underlining my academic credentials are attached together with this application letter for your kind perusal. Should you require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me any time.

All the best! Cheers!
Hi Andre and babybloom,
I want to mention that I like "excited" more than "writing in..."
When you say "I am excited" it makes the reader feel a little excited, too.

I definitely like "currently" more than "at the moment," though! Good idea, because at the moment is much too immediate.

My technical knowledge, conceptual and architectural skills, combined with my enthusiasm and creativity make me a "must have" intern. Moreover, I would be positive contribution to your organization due to my international experience and my global mindfulness. This is just a big claim. Claims are weak. SHOW the reader your creativity with an example of something you are doing or have done. SHOW your technical knowledge by mentioning what articles you have been reading recently. Transform this paragraph from a claim into examples. :-)



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