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I am writing in
to apply for the internship position at .............. which
is scheduled from September 2011 to January 2012.
I am currently
a second semester master student in Architecture and Design at Aalborg University, Denmark. Due to the international framework of my studies and Problem Based Learning approach that Aalborg University imposes, I look forward to work in an
and transform problems into challenging projects through critical thinking, creativity and innovativeness.
This internship is right (right doesn't seem the best word but I can't think of anything. Maybe perfect or beneficial?)
for me at this stage of my development process as
it fits my educational background, my continuing willingness to learn new things and represents a perfect chance to improve my skills. Furthermore, I am a quick learner, hard-working, ambitious person, motivated by goal achievements and have
a multi-perspective approach towards a situation. Nothing provides me with more satisfaction than contributing
to the success of a project.
My technical knowledge, conceptual and architectural skills, combined with my enthusiasm and creativity makes
me a "must have" intern. Moreover, my international experience and global mindfulness
would be a
positive contribution to your organization.
My resume and portfolio underlining my academic credentials are attached together with this application letter for your kind perusal
. Should you require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me any time.
All the best! Cheers!