I saw a great post where you helped Mingkuan -- thanks for all the time you spent there!
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I will never feel comfortable with myself giving up a discipline and school of thought (is that the way to describe it?) that I now recognised I unwittingly gravitated towards since young. As such, I finally decided that I should pursue my passion instead of taking the beaten road as I mature.
Yes, I think that's a good way to describe it... but you have to be more specific. You'll enter the profession as someone with either absolutist ethics or utilitarian ethics. You'll enter the profession with special skills that make you uniquely qualified for certain kinds of work.
What, specifically, do you like to DO every day these days? What kind of work will be enjoyable every day? You have a lot of options for specialization.
The letter starts here, right?------> When I was directed to *classified* right after BMT, I was devastated to only be a corporal for my NS term. Despite this setback, I refused to look down on
Try to avoid using "I believe." Always take it right out. It will always improve the sentence:
believe My past grades are not indicative of my success in NUS. ---so much stronger without that wimpy "I believe." ;-)
Having always been passionate about the Korean culture, and appreciative of their mental fortitude and determination, I applied to study at the Daehan Korean Learning Centre to better appreciate the nuances of the Korean language,
which would enable me to gain a comprehensive insight into their culture, and lifestyle.--I simplified this for you!!
I realized that I was fascinated with the inner workings of society, of what many took for granted. confusing!
It is my belief that m My experiences in ________ and ______ have
allowed prepared me to further enhance my passion for pursuing the social sciences in my tertiary studies at NUS.
At the beginning of this, come up with something to tell them about what motivates you. If you are worried about seeming pompous, all you need is to focus on the cause you support.... what is important to you. That way, your achievements are not matters of ego. They're evidence of your resolve.