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marriages should be arranged by the parents or not?
hello, i am preparing for ielts test, and i am really worried about my writing. could u... »»
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thinhtvdhtm
Today, 03:16am
meisj0n
Today, 03:54am
essay about Siddhartha's Teachers
Siddhartha'sTeachers Siddhartha is the story about a man who goes searching for his inner life.... »»
1
luny
Yesterday, 10:30pm
Jeannie
Yesterday, 11:20pm
TOEFL: "Studying alone or in a group"
Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do... »»
1
hitchhike
Yesterday, 01:45pm
margarita
Yesterday, 02:18pm
Stanford Intellectual Vitality Essay
Would someone please tell me if I'm even on the right track or if my content is... »»
1
fallen92
Yesterday, 11:19am
Llamapoop123
Yesterday, 05:33pm
IELTS essay"people think children's spending time on TV, video..is good,while.."
Some people think children's spending time on TV, video and PC games is good, while others think... »»
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leonyan938
Yesterday, 05:57am

food has become easier to prepare.this change has improved the life
i am preparing for ielts, and i really worry about my writing. please check for my grammar,... »»
1
thinhtvdhtm
Yesterday, 04:12am
fallen92
Yesterday, 11:52am
"Watching Television is bad for children" agree or disagree? Please check it
"Watching Television is bad for children" agree or disagree? Please check it Television plays very important... »»
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lucidmanner
Yesterday, 12:27am
thinhtvdhtm
Today, 03:12am
COUNTRY BOYS - REACTION PAPER please edit this essay non native english speaker
"Country boys" is the new type of documentary movie that I have ever watched because it is... »»
1
jhung620
Nov 19, 09, 08:57pm
EF_Kevin
Today, 12:30am
Literary Analysis on The Haunting of Hill House
*Can someone please just check my grammar?* Section One After reading one of Shirley Jackson's most famous... »»
2
kparham322
Nov 19, 09, 05:57pm
pheelyks
Yesterday, 11:10pm
Toefl essay"Learning about the past has no values for those of us living in the
Hi please give your feed back . I am preparing for toefl and would like to have... »»
1
Poojasugandhi
Nov 19, 09, 04:49pm
EF_Kevin
Yesterday, 10:55pm
Multi-Language Clash Synthesis essay
Having trouble writing this synthesis essay which I am supposed to analyze 2 essays and switch from... »»
2
Joeyson
Nov 19, 09, 01:37pm
pheelyks
Today, 12:02am
Which ideas are better for "Turning Point" Essay to win exchange program?
This is only first draft, without grammar correction, I know it has a lot of mistakes. I... »»
1
Twinkle
Nov 19, 09, 05:27am
purl81
Nov 19, 09, 01:10pm
TOEFL living in places different weather condition vs same weather condition
Could you please critic my writing? Thanks! Some people prefer to live in places that have... »»
2
margarita
Nov 18, 09, 10:57pm
margarita
Yesterday, 10:37pm
Toefl Integrated task" William shakespeare"
Hi preparing for toefl ibt. Please give feed back so that i can improve on integrated writing... »»
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Poojasugandhi
Nov 18, 09, 02:20pm
EF_Kevin
Yesterday, 04:34pm
TOEFL essay "Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the
Hi, Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present.... »»
2
hitchhike
Nov 18, 09, 01:58pm
Poojasugandhi
Nov 18, 09, 03:10pm
TOEFL:::working in a large company or for a small one
In recent decades, more than thousands of large companies have been built all around the world. However,... »»
2
mashhadi
Nov 18, 09, 01:44pm
hitchhike
Yesterday, 01:44pm
TOEFL preference essay " sports vs.arts" - feedback welcomed :)
ESSAY TOPIC : Some people prefer to participate in sports for recreation. Others prefer arts. Which... »»
2
eng_student
Nov 18, 09, 12:30pm
hitchhike
Nov 18, 09, 01:42pm
Toefl essay on Silvio Berlusconi.
please rank this essay and provide me your advice!! Thank you very much Imagine that... »»
3
dar81
Nov 18, 09, 08:21am
EF_Kevin
Yesterday, 04:15pm
Toefl essay which changed people's lives automobiles bicycles airplanes
hi my friends, Another essay,Againe I hope you can help to make it better. Thanks in advance.... »»
2
rmli
Nov 18, 09, 05:32am
Jin
Nov 18, 09, 02:42pm
[TOEFL]Tidal Power_Integrated task.
Dear friends, Pls help me by giving your feedbacks for this writing part. Tks so much.... »»
2
yin
Nov 18, 09, 05:06am
EF_Kevin
Yesterday, 03:13pm
My Two Sons - Thesis statement for Comparison essay
I need some help in developing a Thesis statement and conclusion for my comparison essay. I... »»
4
bmerrell
Nov 17, 09, 05:47pm
TFS109201
Nov 19, 09, 02:56pm
Toefl"It is sometimes important for people to do things that they do not enjoy"
Hi I am preparing for toefl ibt. Please help me with the writing section. Thanks. Do... »»
1
Poojasugandhi
Nov 17, 09, 05:31pm
EF_Susan
Nov 18, 09, 02:43pm
International Studies Paper on the effects of war.......
* some general feedback as well as any spelling or grammatical errors would be greatly appreciated.... »»
1
MGH1989
Nov 17, 09, 04:48pm
EF_Kevin
Nov 18, 09, 04:32pm
Toefl"A person you know is planning to move to your town. What do you think..
Hi I am preparing for toefl. Please help me with the writing section. Thanks. A person... »»
4
Poojasugandhi
Nov 17, 09, 03:16pm
EF_Kevin
Nov 19, 09, 05:09pm
Experience is the best teacher; influential person - Preparing for the Clep exam
Hello! I would like feedback on these two essays that I wrote as exercises to prepare... »»
2
paula
Nov 17, 09, 01:29pm
EF_Kevin
Nov 19, 09, 03:51pm
For toefl--What recent news story affected you the most? In what ways?
Hi, i am preparing for the TOEFL exam and my English is not good. this essay is... »»
4
Helin
Nov 17, 09, 06:46am
Poojasugandhi
Nov 19, 09, 04:42pm
Forward or first page - A Book I am Writing
When y'all get a minute (or an hour) tell me if this is really boring or if... »»
7
Jeannie
Nov 17, 09, 01:16am
Jeannie
Today, 05:40am
Essay on events that have changed Australia's multicultural society - feedback.
Question: Identify and discuss three key events in Australia's history that have shaped our multicultural society.... »»
3
dubulee
Nov 17, 09, 12:15am
EF_Kevin
Nov 19, 09, 12:42pm
my art essay, parthenon vs pantheon
Parthenon vs. Pantheon This is one of the essays I have to write for my art... »»
5
stockwell
Nov 17, 09, 12:03am
sesudita
Nov 19, 09, 02:25pm
TOEFL ESSAY " Shools should ask students to evaluate their teachers"
Hi, I am preparing for the toefl ibt and need help for the writing section. Please give... »»
5
lyhongyen
Nov 16, 09, 10:14pm
Jeannie
Nov 18, 09, 11:15pm
compare between your childhood and right now.
INTRODUCTION TO MY ESSAY ABOUT: your childhood and right now.... »»
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bilal ABUZENAH
Nov 16, 09, 05:05pm
EF_Kevin
Today, 04:02am
What are the problems with English Education in Korea?
Hello,everyone. I'm a new member of this website. And I'm here for help my first essay.... »»
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kimster79
Nov 16, 09, 04:34pm
EF_Kevin
Nov 18, 09, 02:16pm
Comparative Rhetorical Analysis my Topic " Good Hair- Bad Hair"
I'm very confused can someone give me a second opinion Analyze three or four persuasive... »»
1
jenniferdavis
Nov 16, 09, 02:27pm
EF_Kevin
Nov 18, 09, 01:34pm
Parents or other relatives should make important decisions for their older (15 t
Age of 15 is the age of numerous changes in one person. Children at this age always... »»
2
hatung94
Nov 16, 09, 07:02am
EF_Kevin
Nov 17, 09, 06:00pm
Are human needs for farmland, housing, industry more important than saving lands
Hi, friends I am not sure if i have supported enough details for my opinions. Please give... »»
3
tiantianwenzi
Nov 16, 09, 05:47am
EF_Kevin
Nov 19, 09, 05:34pm
TOEFL Parents are the best teachers
Hi! Help, please! Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best... »»
14
margarita
Nov 15, 09, 09:37pm
margarita
Yesterday, 10:07pm
Failed Descriptive Essay Subject Costa Rica
I have trouble writing for my English teacher. I just can't connect with her. I... »»
1
Maethirion
Nov 15, 09, 09:28pm
EF_Kevin
Nov 17, 09, 04:44pm
Comparative Essay for ENG 1100... subject: Depression
This is a simple comparative essay contrasting depressed individuals to healthy individuals and their expectations of depressed... »»
2
Maethirion
Nov 15, 09, 09:19pm
Maethirion
Nov 17, 09, 08:41pm
Toefl essay"Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways
Hi, I am preparing for the toefl ibt and need help for the writing section. Please give... »»
4
Poojasugandhi
Nov 15, 09, 06:35pm
EF_Kevin
Nov 17, 09, 03:40pm
ESSAY ON "THE WAR ROOM" MOVIE ABOUT CLINTON'S '92 PRESIDENTIAL ELECTION CAMPAIGN
The "War Room" is an award winning documentary analyzing the political madness that is involved with a... »»
1
kyleroland
Nov 15, 09, 03:29pm
EF_Susan
Nov 16, 09, 02:56pm
FSU admission essay STRENGTHS
I know i wrote more than 500 words, but i dont know how to make it shorter,... »»
2
DanielVino
Nov 15, 09, 03:46am
EF_Kevin
Nov 16, 09, 05:37pm
Compare and contrast between living in the countryside and the suburbs
I was born in and grew up in a suburb, so I don't have much experience with... »»
2
Thuy Nguyen
Nov 15, 09, 01:59am
EF_Kevin
Nov 16, 09, 12:55pm
Smoking ban - essay argumentative
Smoking should be banned everywhere: The harms of smoking have become more popular around the... »»
4
Abutaleb2009
Nov 14, 09, 08:38pm
Abutaleb2009
Yesterday, 03:18am
A paragrah about water
please help me in my first paragraph Water, the most common .... SEE BELOW »»
3
api
Nov 13, 09, 11:16pm
api
Nov 15, 09, 09:48am
Advertisement Analysis Essay Help - A $385 Billion Dollar Image
Hello EssayForum.com! This is my 1st post onto this website; but I have been a long time... »»
1
MCafOcc
Nov 13, 09, 07:45pm
EF_Kevin
Nov 15, 09, 12:17pm
TOEFL essay What are some important qualities of a good supervisor
What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain... »»
8
rmli
Nov 13, 09, 02:33am
rmli
Nov 18, 09, 03:02am
Creative Essay "The Truth" about Poland
Please review my essay and tell me what you think. I want to know if its horrible... »»
1
evildanny2009
Nov 12, 09, 07:00pm
EF_Kevin
Nov 13, 09, 01:41pm
CBEST - Making Important Decision
Describe a particular time in your life when you had difficulty making an important decision. Identify... »»
2
elainedlcruz
Nov 12, 09, 06:13pm
elainedlcruz
Nov 13, 09, 02:54pm
IS BEOWULF TRULY A HERO?
This is the beginning of an essay which is supposed to be about if Beowulf is a... »»
2
MGW698
Nov 12, 09, 06:26am
caslyn1
Nov 13, 09, 10:58pm
CBEST Essay - Students caught DUI
Hi, can someone review my essay. thanks The state law penalizes students caught DUI by suspending... »»
2
elainedlcruz
Nov 11, 09, 10:44pm
EF_Kevin
Nov 12, 09, 10:13pm
an essay about" Emotion----A very short introduction"
Emotion----A very short introduction Last year, my aunt gave birth to a girl. And in... »»
2
cindy17
Nov 11, 09, 10:11pm
EF_Kevin
Nov 12, 09, 10:09pm
TOEFL Physical exercise should be required part of every school day
Hello! Could you please take a look on my writing and give me suggestions to improve it?... »»
10
margarita
Nov 11, 09, 07:38pm
thinhtvdhtm
Yesterday, 04:09am
City and country living
If you have two choices: living in city or in country , which one will you choose?... »»
2
tinanguyen
Nov 11, 09, 12:15am
EF_Kevin
Nov 11, 09, 10:36pm
Essay about new experiences.
Prompt: use a quote from a book you've read and us about an event or experience that... »»
5
xit9zangel
Nov 10, 09, 05:40pm
EF_Kevin
Nov 13, 09, 12:56pm
Toefl essay What do you prefer, learning by yourself or learning with a teacher
Hi, I am preparing for the toefl ibt. Please help me with the writing section. I am... »»
6
Poojasugandhi
Nov 10, 09, 05:08pm
Poojasugandhi
Nov 12, 09, 12:42pm
TEOFL Essay "Small town vs big city"
Topic: Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big... »»
4
hitchhike
Nov 10, 09, 01:12pm
margarita
Nov 12, 09, 02:05pm
should take circumstance and motivation for committing into account for penalty?
i am preparing for ielst, but i really worry about my writing, could u help me check... »»
4
thinhtvdhtm
Nov 10, 09, 11:19am
EF_Kevin
Nov 11, 09, 12:22pm
Study Abroad Essay
Had to write A brief (300-500 word) essay on why you would like to Study Abroad. Also... »»
6
justin504
Nov 10, 09, 03:28am
EF_Kevin
Nov 11, 09, 11:46am
"Why people love watching action movies" Formal Essay
I am a student in remedial English that seriously need help on revising my paper. My grammar... »»
2
Yojimbo_bobobo
Nov 10, 09, 01:17am
car3n
Nov 15, 09, 11:57am
Essay about Aspects of city living - feedback
hello every one ... how are you ? I hope you all feeling... »»
2
wardooh
Nov 9, 09, 11:49pm
EF_Kevin
Nov 11, 09, 10:54am
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