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Undergraduate Admission Essays

Writing college admission, application, and scholarship essays.

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FIT fashion merchandising admission essay
hi! im trying to get accepted into the fashion institute of technology for fall 2010 and i... »»
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xooxaudreyxoox
Today, 03:49pm

"Why are you considering The Ohio State University?" HELP!
I want to write this essay but i dont want to sound to stupid. tell me what... »»
1
Kev92
Today, 01:44pm
Jeannie
Today, 02:42pm
Someone who has made an impact on you? need help with structure and grammar
I'm really bad with punctuation and I also need tips to on improving my essay.... »»
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volitales
Today, 12:59pm

To my future roommate - Stanford Prompt
Prompt: Virtually all of Stanford's undergraduates live on campus. What would you want your future roommate... »»
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26matrices
Today, 08:48am

"Tutoring as an extracurricular activity"-UNIV OF ILLINOIS
Essay 2: In an essay of 300 words or less, choose one extracurricular activity, work experience, or... »»
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harsha9
Today, 07:46am

SOP-----Msc-OIL and gas engineering
I am so happy to join the forum. My statement of purpose is attached below. please kindly... »»
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balco
Today, 05:23am

UC Prompt number 2: My greatest accomplishment
Hello, Please make any necessary grammatical/spelling corrections, word or phrase changes, or any feedback at all, no... »»
0
gotwavez
Today, 02:57am

UC Prompt 1: K-pop
Prompt: Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and... »»
1
colorfuloving
Today, 12:51am
Rowa
Today, 04:45am
Unfair Bias Essay for University of Texas at Austin
I am applying to University of Texas at Austin School of Architecture and this is my first... »»
2
JacksonBrock
Yesterday, 10:34pm
JacksonBrock
Today, 08:49am
Martial Arts & Me -UC Promt 2
"Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What... »»
2
seivert9
Yesterday, 08:27pm
flashofadream
Yesterday, 10:28pm
Johns Hopkins Supplement Essay - Limit is only my imagination
1. Write a brief essay in which you respond to the following question. (freshman applicants only): Johns... »»
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wodufdlfkrh
Yesterday, 08:22pm
Rowa
Today, 05:00am
(Prompt #1) Wisconsin-Madison Personal Statement
Hello to everyone. Please comment on my essay. I hope I can get the advices from you... »»
1
danieldd
Yesterday, 07:58pm
Mayra
Today, 10:30am
"Coming to America" (How has your family influenced who you are)
How has your family history, culture, or environment influenced who you are? My family's history greatly... »»
1
Jfils
Yesterday, 06:44pm
Vulpix
Today, 12:31am
Why Northwestern (opportunities and Nobel prize-winning professors)
Why Northwestern? This is only the first three paragraphs of my essay. It's a very rough... »»
1
Natalie391
Yesterday, 06:35pm
Jfils
Yesterday, 06:58pm
Being morally, physically, and intellectually strong, "Vires, Artes, Mores"
I've been working on this essay for a while now trying to reword it and reword it... »»
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vabreeze0
Yesterday, 06:16pm

Mathematics is my passion - Saint Louis University Scholarship Essay
Please any feedback would be much appreciated. Not very concern about grammer at this point, just comment... »»
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ryman522
Yesterday, 04:10pm
ryman522
Today, 03:33pm
UC Prompt #1 - My World
What do you think of this essay? Is the alliteration overwhelming? Does it distract from my main... »»
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Occidentalis
Yesterday, 01:39pm
shinji344
Yesterday, 03:29pm
Common app. ethical dilemma: alcoholism
Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its... »»
1
calderon
Yesterday, 01:37am
TFS109201
Yesterday, 03:15pm
UW Describe an experience of Culture difference positive and negative you have
Family is a universal name all over the world. Even though, different cultures can influence on the... »»
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xxxiecong
Yesterday, 12:26am

An essay about Pole Vaut-Rutger's essay
Prompt=Rutgers University is a vibrant community of people with a wide variety of backgrounds and experiences. How... »»
2
woogiez
Nov 18, 09, 11:59pm
Vulpix
Yesterday, 05:16pm
Helping Someone Dear to Me- UC prompt 2
Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, Contribution, or experience that is important to you. What... »»
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greatzak
Nov 18, 09, 11:40pm

Choosing college similiar to choosing girlfriend??
Looking for any ideas to add or critiques. I'm trying to answer why I choose UCF and... »»
2
PRippr
Nov 18, 09, 11:06pm
PRippr
Yesterday, 02:26am
UC tranfer essay prompt #2 overcame
hey you guys. this is my personal statement for prompt #2. if you can please revise it... »»
2
Zonum85
Nov 18, 09, 10:25pm
Zonum85
Yesterday, 11:51am
CommonApp Essay: Helping a Friend
Please read and criticize, I need the criticism and welcome it. This is my CommonApp Essay on... »»
2
Pikafu
Nov 18, 09, 10:10pm
Pikafu
Yesterday, 06:02pm
Essay prompt 2# What is your intended major?
Prompt 2# What is your intended major, how did you get interested in the subject, any experience... »»
1
lucky7x123
Nov 18, 09, 09:42pm
iamcentrum
Yesterday, 01:52am
"Field Hockey" Common App Essay
Please write an essay (250 words minimum) on a topic of your choice or on one of... »»
1
Anguyen12t
Nov 18, 09, 09:32pm
mmmargarita
Nov 18, 09, 10:19pm
UC#2 personal quality <confidence and interaction> Please help me!
Thank you for your click to my essay :) I hope you enjoy Any feedbacks or advice... »»
2
h19890623
Nov 18, 09, 09:08pm
Jfils
Today, 08:29am
Consider your talents strengths academic and otherwise. What is one thing you do
really well? Please offer some input, thanks. I believe that leadership is a talent. Granted,... »»
1
ohiostate
Nov 18, 09, 09:04pm
greatzak
Nov 18, 09, 11:34pm
<From Loneliness to Passion> UC prompt#1 Communications major
Any advice or suggestions are welcomed! Thank you so much! Prompt #1: What is your intended... »»
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h19890623
Nov 18, 09, 08:51pm
h19890623
Today, 07:57am
UC Prompt 2 : Helping a friend in need
It feels like I listed alot of contributions but I want to know if i can all... »»
1
Fallacy
Nov 18, 09, 08:51pm
greatzak
Nov 18, 09, 11:28pm
Which essay is stronger? (General Personal Statement)
I've written two essays for the overall common app essay, but I can't decide which is better.... »»
3
amaryrose
Nov 18, 09, 07:54pm
amaryrose
Nov 18, 09, 08:49pm
"full of changes" - UIUC Transfer Essay
Hey, I would really appreciate it if anyone could skim through my essay for any errors, or... »»
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kev946
Nov 18, 09, 07:25pm

Which of the academic and social communities are most interesting to you?
Answer the essay question: (do not exceed one page.) Benjamin Franklin established the Union Fire Company, the... »»
1
circlesky
Nov 18, 09, 06:58pm
EF_Susan
Today, 01:36pm
Perseverance Innovate Achievements - Personal Statement to UC
Hello everyone. Here's my pre-final draft for my college essay. I'd appreciate the feedback because it took... »»
1
shinji344
Nov 18, 09, 06:51pm
EF_Susan
Today, 01:25pm
UC Prompt 2 - - - - Overcoming Illness
Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What... »»
2
ateitelb
Nov 18, 09, 05:19pm
gumdrop41
Nov 18, 09, 08:41pm
"mouth-watering contributions " - UC Essay Prompt 1 - Community
Prompt: Describe the world you come from and how it has shaped your dreams and aspirations.... »»
1
ateitelb
Nov 18, 09, 04:29pm
Notoman
Nov 18, 09, 06:21pm
Short Activity Essay for Common App - Volunteering in Ecuador
Over the summer of 2008, I had the privilege to travel to Ecuador with a group of... »»
4
melaaanieee
Nov 18, 09, 03:47pm
amaryrose
Nov 18, 09, 07:30pm
An experience in which I left my comfort zone and how this experience changed me
This is my essay for the University of Richmond. Can you please check for grammer and... »»
2
trishaa78
Nov 18, 09, 03:36pm
Twinkle
Yesterday, 05:09am
Why are you considering The Ohio State University?
Why are you considering The Ohio State University? Choosing Ohio State University to be my transfer... »»
1
Jin
Nov 18, 09, 02:45pm
ateitelb
Nov 18, 09, 05:17pm
Argumentative essay about interracial marriage - thesis statements
I have never written an argumentative essay before, but I have a thesis statement and need to... »»
1
kristib_25
Nov 18, 09, 09:49am
linmark
Nov 18, 09, 01:48pm
Toefl : lifestyle individualism VS collectivism
In western society general living style is based on individualism, while in Asia it is based on... »»
1
Babies
Nov 18, 09, 09:37am
EF_Susan
Today, 12:52pm
I am going to make it to UCF, "bump in the road"
The UCF essay is 500 words in length, and is about "a bump in the road" you... »»
1
takemeoutoxox
Nov 18, 09, 09:33am
Llamapoop123
Yesterday, 06:13am
"the high-level knowledge" - UC #2: 2 experience
Stop or keep going when people have made some process? What can truly lead people to the... »»
1
franklinz622
Nov 18, 09, 09:25am
ruzhang143
Today, 08:19am
MPH Essay: Choice of degree, program, concentration
MPH grad essay: could someone please review the beginning for me? Thanks! Prompt: Choice of... »»
1
PublicHealth26
Nov 18, 09, 08:09am
EF_Susan
Today, 12:31pm
Describe the world you come from and how it shapes your dreams? For UC Berkeley
Hi,guys. This is my essay for Berkeley......I've already spent 10 days on this and this is my... »»
3
HarmonSa
Nov 18, 09, 06:07am
EF_Kevin
Today, 03:24pm
UC Essay #1: My family and my dreams
I need to keep this essay around 300 words since my other UC essay is really long..ugh...... »»
4
JennB2288
Nov 18, 09, 04:43am
JennB2288
Yesterday, 02:43am
"Born in China mainland" - Dickinson essay
Dickinson College founder, statesman and physician Benjamin Rush wrote several essays on education for this new nation.... »»
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lycjack
Nov 18, 09, 03:35am
EF_Kevin
Today, 02:04pm
"I was born in a business environment" - UC Prompt
What is your intended major? Discuss how your interest in the subject developed and describe any experience... »»
2
musicinmypants
Nov 18, 09, 03:33am
EF_Kevin
Today, 02:00pm
7th Inning Stretch, Baseball - UC
Hi there, The following is my personal statement for the second UC prompt. Please feel free... »»
1
traderjoe9
Nov 18, 09, 02:19am
EF_Kevin
Yesterday, 09:42pm
My half-sister UC Prompt #2
Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What... »»
2
aleggz
Nov 18, 09, 12:05am
aleggz
Yesterday, 08:58pm
My world, my Greek family, my dreams - UC Prompt #1
Prompt #1 Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school... »»
3
lyra88
Nov 17, 09, 11:58pm
EF_Kevin
Today, 01:52pm
FSU Application Essay - How "Vires, Artes, Mores" applies to me. - Feedback plz
I need critique and such on my essay, pleeasse. I want it to be the best possible... »»
3
LehFoxeh
Nov 17, 09, 11:07pm
EF_Kevin
Today, 01:35pm
"the western coast of India" - world you come from
Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell... »»
2
calderon
Nov 17, 09, 10:57pm
EF_Kevin
Yesterday, 08:40pm
MA College of pharamacy supplement - feedback
"Please submit a brief 250-word essay discussing your reasons for choosing the specific health care career you... »»
1
nmp07
Nov 17, 09, 10:36pm
EF_Susan
Yesterday, 01:41pm
Surgery as a child, impact on my life, help revise my personal statement
The UC prompt Describe the world you come from — for example,... »»
5
kathyvanna
Nov 17, 09, 10:28pm
EF_Kevin
Yesterday, 08:35pm
Most Significant Person (my father) - common app feedback
Most Significant Person--Common App Essay Topic: Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on... »»
3
nmp07
Nov 17, 09, 10:27pm
EF_Kevin
Yesterday, 08:29pm
Psych Major/Volunt Exp/Mothers PhD influence? - UC Transf. Prompt 1 & 2
I started working on my UC Transf Prompt 1 and I honestly am stuck and anxious and... »»
3
calcalcal
Nov 17, 09, 10:20pm
calcalcal
Today, 03:35pm
UT Introductory statement-"Someone who has made an impact on your life..."
So for my essay, I need to write about someone who has impacted my life and explain... »»
3
embriatarka
Nov 17, 09, 09:59pm
EF_Kevin
Yesterday, 08:19pm
Paint a verbal portrait of an ideal physician...
Paint a verbal portrait of an ideal physician and tell us about the experiences that you have... »»
2
neil098
Nov 17, 09, 09:14pm
EF_Kevin
Yesterday, 08:13pm
"church has always been a big priority" - duquesne admission essay
Mandatory essay question: Please discuss the following (300 word minimum): Tell us something unique about you, why... »»
2
Devyn Christine
Nov 17, 09, 09:14pm
EF_Kevin
Yesterday, 08:11pm
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