'Multicultural country and gays' - benefits of being in a diverse cultural community

To attend a diverse cultural community means I can make friends with people from all over the world, learn variety of languages and meet people that have different sexual orientation. My homeland is not a multicultural country. So I expect to go to a university which mixes all types of people. Virginia Tech gives me the chance to attain knowledge about other ethnicities cultures and morals.

Personally speaking, I support gays' right and hope more people understand and stop discriminating them. Because I know there are still some countries against gays and abandon the mass-media mentioning anything about homosexual. If I go to college, I'll organize a GSA club thus allowing people from different backgrounds and beliefs have the opportunity to realize gay people are not evil and they just like us, nothing special. To do this, I need make friends with different people and start to learn their culture. Once I get familiar with their culture, I can figure out why they against gay and find some way to change their opinions.

All in all, going to a college that has diverse cultural community broadens my horizon and develops me an open mind.

Virginia Tech gives me the chance to attain knowledge about other ethnicities, cultures, and morals. (Commas)
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