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international sport events play a significant role in decreasing tensions..


soraya 1 / -  
Nov 1, 2011   #1
Sport is always known as a way to alleviate the tension and we can not deny the pivotal role of it in decreasing the international anxiety. As you know sporting events, particularly Olympics and football World Cup, are the most popular events which attracts millions of people's attention. Therefore, we can use them as a vehicle for achieving a peaceful world.

Sporting events always take place in a host country, where all athlete and all spectators gather together for a period of time. All these people from all over the world with different cultures and dissimilar nations spend the whole time together. Which event could be a better opportunity for us to get to know each other?

We all want our country to be the most powerful one and show others that we are the strongest and the smartest. It is human instinct to be patriotic. The ancients tried to show their power by invading other countries and controlling them. However some still try the old fashioned way for expressing the sense of patriotism, sporting events is the safest way to share this feeling. When a country wins a competition and keep its flag flying proudly, no one can hide his happiness and pride.

Holding these events can also result in renew ties between citizens of a particular country. Participating in these occasions, the public desire for winning and emotional supports which spectators and whole country give to athletes all result in solidarity, which is the first step toward peace.

I am all in favor of international sport events. Although they are not a complete solution to tension, yet they have significant effects. Even a herculean task is achievable if we move step by step, and this is a major and peaceful step.

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soshianet 16 / 47  
Nov 1, 2011   #2
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SHAHFAHAD - / 1  
Nov 23, 2011   #3
International sport events play a significant role in decreasing tensions..
FOOTBALL IS THE MOST POPULAR GAME AND PLAYED SIGNIFICANT PIVOTAL ROLE IN OUR LIFE.THIS SPORTS GAME ALLEVIATE The international tension and generate the encourage among two nation .worldcup football sports game is benefical for poor people . These sport games generate friendship among two nation and removes the miss understanding .when a country win the competition and keeps the flag proudly .

Other sports game are like a cricket .4Months ago there were a competition pakistan vs india .Before the match all country was very excite and and also politic.This sports event the alleviative enemity among 2 counties.The government spended lacks of dollar for and improves the ties.During the match sadar asif ali zardari and man mohin singh participated in the match AND ALSO IMPROVE OUR GOOD TIES AND ALLEVIATE A ENEMETI .

IN conclusion the sports event is very good and ease international tension and provide good opputunity

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