'I dream about going to college, but I don't have much money' - About yourself

I am Tiffany McDavid, Im going to Virgina College in Spartanburg taking Medical billing and coding. I have completed two years in Clerical Service at Miami Valley Career Technology Center.

I always dream of going to college but I had a rough childhood and we didn't have much money, I never though I would be able to go. I want my dreams to come true and advance my education to become more productive person.

What else should I put about me .

Revision: I have always dreamed of going to college, but I had a rough childhood with little money, I never thought I would be able to go. I wanted my dreams to come true so that I could advance my education and become more productive.

Not bad.

Thank you. Do you think i should put any thing or do you have any ideas that can help me.

why my education is so important to me is because I want to have agood job so my kids will have health insurance. I'm only eighthteen and I've never had health insurance and I don't want to put my kids through what I had to go thru.