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Leadership, Knowledge, Adversity, Service, Challenge, Goals - insight resume


selam19 3 / 5  
Apr 11, 2011   #1
I was wondering if you guys could help me with this if its okay and please tell me what do you think about it?

1.Leadership/Group Contribution: Describe examples of your leadership experience in which you have significantly influenced other, helped resolve disputes, or contributed to group effforts over time. Consider responsibilities to initiatives taken in or out of school.

One of my most experiences has been done for the young people in the United State. When i was in High School I voluntary for the young people to clean thier garedan for three hour and raising money for babies. The other one is I sending some foods for united state soldier in Afghanistan.We developed programs that taught leadership.

2. Knowledge in a field/creativity: Describe any of your special interests and how you have developed knowledge in these areas. Give examples of your creativity: the ability to see alternatives; take diverse perspectives; come up with many, varied, or original ideas; or willingness to try new things.

My biggest area of interests has always been science or mixing chemicals to see reactions, I have always found science to be fascinating. Because I always deram to be Radiologist Technician so i have a deram to study science or mixing chemicals. I like to see how and why things work starting from the small things like cells to the larger things like planets.

3) Dealing with adversity: Describe the most significant challenge you have faced and the steps you have taken to address this challenge. Include whether you turned to anyone in facing that challenge, the role that person played, and what you learned about yourself.

One of the bigger challenges in my life is living without parents in United States. It's really hard living without parents because you can't ask whatever you want. It doesn't sound right but when I was 13 my dad passed and I don't have any information about my mam I grow up with my grand ma. After my grand ma passed I move to United States to live with my uncle it was difficult to live in USA because they speak different. English is my second language. Now am good with my language.

4) Community service: Explain what you have done to make your community a better place to live. Give examples of specific projects in which you have been involved in over time.

I have always enjoyed community service, especially with choir group in our church. My first volunteering was at church teaching different church song for the kid I been enjoyed with them .it makes me glad when the kids song load and respect their parents.

5) Handling systemic challenges: Describe your experiences facing or witnessing discrimination. Tell us how you responded and what you learned from those experiences and how they prepared you to contribute to the EWU community.

As a Christian student transferring from a private to public school I faced some cruel religious discrimination. At this time I was young and didn't understand why people were being so harsh about my personal beliefs. This confuses and made me feel very awful about myself. As I grown up and have continued to face religious but have learned to believe in myself more and not to let other poples to make you believes.

6) Goals/task commitment: Articulate the goals you have established for yourself and your efforts to accomplish them. Give at least one specific example that demonstrates your work ethic/diligence

My biggest goal that I have for myself is that I want to become radiologist technician. I decided that when I was in ten grades and I do not expect to change my goals may be after four Universities. I plan to attend a four year university. I always had a dream to graduate University not in college.
Real Fog 5 / 26  
Apr 12, 2011   #2
One of my most experiences has been done for the young people in the United State. When i was in High School I was a volunteer for the young people to clean thier gare dan for three hours and raising ed money for babies. The other one wasto sending some foods for united state soldiers in Afghanistan.We developed programs that taught leadership.
OP selam19 3 / 5  
Apr 12, 2011   #3
Thanks so much
Real Fog
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Apr 14, 2011   #4
How many words/characters are you allowed to use for each of these? Be sure to use as many as they allow.

Capitalize "I"...
Do not capitalize high school:
When i was in High School I was in high school I voluntary volunteered for the young people to clean thier garedan for three hour and raising money for babies What do you mean here? Try to find out the name of the organization and look at how they describe what they do. This sentence is not clear.

I just noticed TURBINA'S correction, and I like the way she fixed the sentence! Do you like it, Askal?

The other one is I sending some foods for united state I also helped in an effort to send food to American soldiers in Afghanistan.

My biggest goal that I have for myself is that I want to become radiologist technician so that I can ______________________ (Explain why you want to CONTRIBUTE TO SOCIETY as a radiologist instead of as some other kind of professional. Explain your unique life plan.

I chose radiology as my profession when I was in grade ten, and I do not expect...

:-) Keep working at it! Do you have any questions about these prompts?
OP selam19 3 / 5  
Apr 15, 2011   #5
Kevin ... Thanks you so much ... It helps alot


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