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Some people think that in modern society individuals are becoming more dependent on each other.

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People are living longer lives now than they did in the past.

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IELTS Writing Task 1 - national consumer spending

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Education at the University of Twente - motivation letter

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News plays an important part in most people's lives

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Abstract: Relationship between customers and supermarkets

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People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it

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Many women now have children later in life. What are the causes? What are the pros and cons?

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Online classes make conventional classrooms unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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IT usage - reasons why I am proposing to these institutions (AAS)

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Preventing foreign companies from opening businesses to protect the local companies

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The Impact of Social Media on Mental Health

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(WRITING TASK 2) Cosmetic surgery

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In some countries, many children are becoming overweight and unhealthy.

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a huge money and time should be spent on wild animals or human population

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Coming of Age - Personal Statement for GKS Scholarship

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A traditional South-Asian household - Application for Waterloo Fermat Workshop

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Do you think it is better to do schoolwork with other students or to work alone?

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Point of view different from a teacher or employer - FIT Portfolio

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Going with EV electric cars - resarch paper

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Living away from home during university? - Ielts writing task 2

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The following graph shows the percentage of unemployment rates for the female in the UK.

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Essay on the importance of use of force.

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Waterloo Computer Engineering: Reasons for choosing your program

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The Potential of Artificial Intelligence in Healthcare - AI Persuasive Research Essay for ENG102

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Writing task 1: online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010

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AAS - Translation Studies : Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?

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IELTS WT2: spoken communication is more powerful than written communication.

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a) give up to three practical examples of how you intend to use the knowledge, skills and connection

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Imprisonment is the best solution to crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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