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Motivational Letter for Erasmus RePIC Joint Masters Program / National Development Planning

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Essay for bachelor degree in a German university - data analyst

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GLOCAL PROGRAMME - CREATIVE INDUSTRY POLICY AND ECOSYSTEM

3 - Hi Holt! I've revised my essay. Hope this answer your feedback :) ---- My academic and professional...

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2 - You can have a general discussion of your academic history, motivation, and study plan that could be applicable to...

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Statement of Purpose for PhD in Computer Science (with focus on AI in healthcare)

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Education as a force of change- UWC application essay

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Undergraduatealmosthalloween - Oct 25, 2025Holt - Oct 26, 2025

Linguistics and Natural Language Processing Personal Statement - University of Edinburgh MSc

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Graduatethinker24 - Oct 23, 2025Holt - Oct 26, 2025

Some people think that allowing students to work part-time while studying has more advantages

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Conflicting personal values - essay for UWC

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TU Delft - Motivation Letter for MSc Geomatics for the Built Environment

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?

2 - This is not acknowledged in the original prompt. It is an idea that is implied and is therefore,...

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VIDEO RECORDS ARE A BETTER WAY TO LEARN ABOUT THE WAY OTHER PEOPLE IN THE WORLD LIVE THAN DOCUMENTS

3 - Revised version: Some people say that it is better for them to explore foreign cultures through videos rather than...

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"From the linoleum to the marble" - Personal Statement

2 - Kindly include the prompt that you are writing in response to next time so that I can give a...

Undergraduatelolgiancarlo - Oct 22, 2025Holt - Oct 23, 2025

Nepal education - Motivation letter for scholarship

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Motivation letter for admission to bussiness technology master program in University of Twente

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To work as a policy analyst - ERAMUS MUNDUS MAPP ISS-TRACK APPLICATION

2 - I find the start of the motivational letter a bit confusing. There is something missing in the middle. I...

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Some people believe that online learning will replace traditional classroom in near future.

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Requirements for Germany Scholarship

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Suitable candidate - motivational letter Finance Stipendium Hungaricum for Master

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It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with their parents.

2 - Kindly stay within suggested 300 word limitation for the Task 2 essay to ensure that you will be focusing...

Writing Feedbackscorpions009 - Oct 18, 2025Holt - Oct 19, 2025

A culmination of nihilism and existentialism.

2 - The essay was difficult for me to read because of the lack of pauses between the ideas presented. There...

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GKS U 2026 SOP for Business administration + finance

2 - The essay is too creative in presentation. It focused too much on the telling of a story that it...

UndergraduateShubhay07 - Oct 14, 2025Holt - Oct 15, 2025

International Aid - yes or no?

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Nigeria and Economic Constraints - Statements of Purpose (S.O.P)

2 - You should not open the statement of purpose with a reference to the thoughts of someone else. The reviewer...

UndergraduateMystro_Dynamic - Oct 13, 2025Holt - Oct 14, 2025

Being Excluded in a project - Waterloo AIF Question #3 - Experience Reflection

2 - The reason why you were sidelined by the group in meetings should be clearly explained in the statement. You...

UndergraduatePancakes2 - Oct 13, 2025Holt - Oct 14, 2025

Starting a music club at my school - Waterloo AIF question #2 - Community Involvement

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UndergraduatePramodChavali - Oct 12, 2025Holt - Oct 12, 2025

My Passion for Music - Waterloo AIF question #1

2 - The passion aspect is a bit thin in this presentation. It started off on the wrong foot as well....

UndergraduatePramodChavali - Oct 12, 2025Holt - Oct 12, 2025

Undervalued at a hackathon - Waterloo AIF Question #3 - Experience Reflection

2 - While your story shows how you eventually recovered from being undervalued by your teammates, it took time for you...

UndergraduatePramodChavali - Oct 12, 2025Holt - Oct 12, 2025

Passion for Game Development - Waterloo AIF Question 4 - Goals for Waterloo

3 - Hi Holt, Thank you for your response, and sorry for the late reply, I thought I responded to...

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GKS-U 2026 Personal Statement - Food Science and Food Engineering

3 - Firstly, thank you so much for your valuable advice. And secondly, I apologize for the late reply. ...

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