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Smoking in public places (sentence correction)


lucyindasky 1 / 2  
Jul 22, 2012   #1
Hi :)
I wonder if I wrote the sentences without any grammatical errors.

There are two significant reasons why smoking in public places is brought to attention.

"~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~," said Johnson, urging the government to designate all public places as smoking areas.
-> His argument is that people should be able to smoke freely in all public places...
tommyboy614 2 / 12  
Jul 22, 2012   #2
No, those sentences sound and look perfectly fine to me.
OP lucyindasky 1 / 2  
Jul 22, 2012   #3
Thank you very much, tommyboy! :)
samenmohammad 10 / 19  
Jul 29, 2012   #4
I think grammar is couldn't be learned easily. You should read a lot materials and books and also some outdoor classes are essential.
FormerIvyAO - / 18  
Jul 29, 2012   #5
Actually, I find an error in the first one. "brought to attention" leaves me asking to whose attention?
Msx punk 2 / 15  
Aug 8, 2012   #6
nice one, i figured out some grammer mistakes!! You should add some good words too, but over all it was great


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