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Is this sentence (about the favorite thing) correct?

sweetbitterroseThreads: 5 Posts: 25	Sep 5, 2008, 06:23am #1
Good evening I'm practising writing. Please help me check this sentence up. " The favourite thing I like about him is that he is responsible for everything he does." Is it a correct sentence? Thanks

EF_Team5Threads: - Posts: 2,656 Author: Gloria, EssayForum.com	Sep 5, 2008, 04:29pm #2
Good afternoon. More appropriately would be "My favorite thing about him is that he is responsible for everything he does." Hope this helps. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com

sweetbitterroseThreads: 5 Posts: 25	Sep 6, 2008, 12:09am #3
Thank you so much, Gloria.

EF_Team5Threads: - Posts: 2,656 Author: Gloria, EssayForum.com	Sep 6, 2008, 08:49am #4
You're very welcome! Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com

sweetbitterroseThreads: 5 Posts: 25	Sep 12, 2008, 10:12am #5
Good evening,Gloria! Can you please help me check this sentence out? "She should get on the same bus the next day, look for the boy, return him the money and say sorry to him" Can I use many verbs in a sentence in that way? Thanks.

EF_Team5Threads: - Posts: 2,656 Author: Gloria, EssayForum.com	Sep 12, 2008, 08:23pm #6
Good evening! You are so very close. "She should get on the same bus the next day, look for the boy, return the money to him, and say sorry to him." You could also write, "She should get on the bus the next day, look for the boy, return the money to him, and apologize." Hope this helps! Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com

sweetbitterroseThreads: 5 Posts: 25	Sep 13, 2008, 12:21am #7
Thank you for your check, Gloria! It really helps!

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