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The basic human needs etc. need to paraphrase these sentences


omar sat 1 / 1  
Dec 10, 2010   #1
1. The basic human needs.

- stay connected with others.

* e.g. connecting with your employees &
allowing them to understand that they are
a valuable part of the company.

- need to 'variety'.

* e.g. stimulation the minds of your employees.

* e.g. Assign one day a week as casual dress day.

- Achieve a Feeling of Significance.

* e.g. understanding how important your employees
are to your company.
MeVexatPede /  
Dec 10, 2010   #2
Hi. Might I suggest explaining your assignment in more detail? It's hard to understand what parts are the prompt and what parts are your writing. People will be better able to help you then. :)
OP omar sat 1 / 1  
Dec 10, 2010   #3
Hi,

I need to change this sentence in other words, without changing the meaning.

Thanks
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Dec 20, 2010   #4
stay connected with others.

I would revise it this way:
Interact with other people

Interesting new experiences

Finding a sense of fulfillment.

I hope that helps you!


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