umulbaneen 4 / 27 Dec 29, 2009 #1As I grew up, the perplexity that surrounded jigsaw puzzles grew with each foot.please improve the above phraseim trying to say that the perplexity that clouded me about jigsaw puzzles grew with age (foot-by-foot)
gumdrop41 6 / 30 Dec 29, 2009 #2I don't think you need "with each foot" as it's repetitive against the "i grew up"As I grew up, the perplexity surrounding jigsaw puzzles only flourished - or something like that :)Please give some feedback on my essays!
OP umulbaneen 4 / 27 Dec 29, 2009 #3heyy thanks for your reply i will respond to your query as soon as im done with the essay im writing
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129 Jan 6, 2010 #4It grew as you go taller?With every inch I grew, the perplexity that surrounded of jigsaw puzzles seemed to grow along with me.This is a tough sentence! I look forward to seeing what you write! :-)
OP umulbaneen 4 / 27 Jan 6, 2010 #5hey thanksi was actually writing on how the interest in jigsaw puzzles has grown with age but i was trying to sound humorous in order to convey diversity within mehahathanks anyway