Hi Murko Agom
Firstly, you did not write the topic completely, I mean you did not clarify whether the question ask you to give your opinion and take side or just discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
I think INTRODUCTION need to be developed, you should add some sentences describing what are you going to talk. For example, if the topic ask you to give your opinion ,you can write: In my opinion, governments are responsible to provide people's need. Providing welfare for unemployed people can prevent lots of crimes. However, governments should use their authority to provide higher job opportunity and solve the problem of unemployment. This will indicate that what will be the topic of you paragraphs.
By providing support to its people, itthe government gives a change to its people to sustain themselves and think of a long term solution.
Generally, I think this sentence requires rewriting
I hope this would help you
Regards