Of the goals that one can set for themselves in their lives
Look at this intro... not good! It is awkward and full of unnecessary words. Whenever you say "one can set for themselves," it sounds wrong.
Less is more:
Of the goals that one can set for themselves in their lives a Among the most noble goals is the pursuit of knowledge.
The skills that I learned in my first occupation transferred well
towards my next occupation which was when I became a Medical Laboratory Technician specializing in
Don't say translate towards or transfer towards...
As I think back on my past experiences, I believe that I have some unique qualities and abilities that prepare me to
a successful career in education ___________ say something about the actual work... prepare me to empower children and communicate with them effectively.
It is my intention to be a
great high school Chemistry teacher and I believe that I possess the ability to be such. Challenge yourself to write the sentence in a way that expresses a powerful insight about teaching. Make every sentence count. It is not interesting to read sentences that simply assert a general goal. Share an insight about education.
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