During my bachelors although I took courses on Software Engineering, Computer Networks, Data Structures, Computer Architecture, Operating Systems, Computer Graphics, Design and Analysis of Algorithms, Language Processors, Microprocessors, Artificial Intelligence, Fundamentals of Computer Science etc. but the courses that held my interest
Computer Science etc.,
but the courses that held my interest
Although I liked my first job as Database Officer but the work was mainly
Although I liked my first job as Database Officer
but the work was mainly
Don't use 'but' with 'although' in the same sentence.
I wish to earn an MS degree in Computer Science...
In this paragraph, you talk about your ambitions in the beginning, but later switch to the university specifics. Try to keep this in different paragraphs. Hold on to a single aspect if possible in a paragraph.
In my opinion I have a focused outlook, strong grasp of the field, aptitude of research
aptitude
for research
Overall, a very nicely written SOP. Will definitely help me write one!
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