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MPH statement - how public health will help my future goals and my country


karthik 2 / 3 1  
Nov 15, 2012   #1
Statement of purpose

Primary health care is not just better or universal medical care, but truly a new public health. Not a program, but an approach.A composition of elements that are essential health needs constituting an indivisible package.

It was during my clinical rotatory internship in Osmania general hospital, after final year of my medical school, I was posted in the infectious diseases department and during one of my routine out patient examinations I had a chance to encounter with Mr. Ravi, presented with worsening fatigue, intermittent jaundice and purpuric cutaneous lesions and generalized vasculitis. upon several laboratory and histological investigations we diagnosed the case as chronic hepatitis B with fatal end stage liver cirrhosis and the purpuric cutaneous lesions as leukocytoclastic vasculitis due to deposition of circulating hepatitis B antigen-antibody immune complexes.I got acquainted with him and his family over his regular visits and the deep seated pain in their eyes moved me after I explained about the prognosis of the disease.The patient could not be saved due to extensive and irreversible liver damage.This experience challenged me and ignited the spark in me to research further about infectious diseases, their prevention and control.I wish to augment my knowledge in public health before pursuing a residency in infectious diseases and be an integral part of public health sector in India.

Hepatitis B virus is a DNA virus with a remarkably compact genomic structure; despite its small, circular, 3200-bp size, HBV DNA codes for four sets of viral products with a complex, multi particle structure. HBV achieves its genomic economy by relying on an efficient strategy of encoding proteins from four overlapping genes: S, C, P, and X. HBV replicates in the liver but exist in extra hepatic sites, contain their own endogenous DNA polymerase, have partially double-strand and partially single-strand genomes, are associated with acute and chronic hepatitis and hepato-cellular carcinoma, and rely on a replicative strategy unique among DNA viruses but typical of retroviruses. Patient may be asymptomatic during acute infection and the virus is transmitted by blood and bodily fluids. HBV infection is one among the leading infectious disease in the world with an average estimation of 36 million carriers in India.

My penchant for biology in school was kindled from interesting experiments on photosynthesis, vegetative reproduction and field visits to local primary health centers, active participation in immunization programs like " pulse polio" , environmental programs like "green India" where we planted around 1000 trees around my town,other community and welfare programs gave me a basic foundation on public health and sparkled my interest in medicine right from school. After my high school and intermediate education with 85% I moved to china along with my family in 2005. I got into M.B.B.S (bachelor of medicine and surgery or bachelor of clinical medicine) program at medical school of Soochow University. The program was very challenging and I enjoyed my classes and clinical postings in various clinical departments at the first affiliated hospital of Soochow university.The unique language and culture of china is amazing and I had a chance to learn the basics of traditional chinese medicine and accupuncture. During my third year of medical school I was introduced to the subject of preventive and social medicine and my interest was peaked by my mentor mr. lu chen under whom I learned my basics of different kinds of statistical studies, actively participated in various clinical trials in the research department of our university, the demographic studies and prevalence of various infectious diseases in the municipal and shantytown areas of suzhou. I had the opportunity to participate in health camps conducted by our hospital where we performed tasks like collecting stool samples in cholera endemic regions, counseling people on various health care measures like safe sanitation, measures for prevention of sexually transmitted diseases, maternal and child health services like regular antenatal checkups,immunization procedures and schedule,distribution of iron and folic acid tablets for pregnant ladies. I worked as a teaching assistant conducting classes for undergraduates in my medical school.I stood among the top three in my class for the year 2009-2010.

I was back to India in 2010 after my final year of medical school and started working as clinical intern in Osmania general hospital for 2 years where I was rotated in different departments like cardiology, surgery, orthopedics, pediatrics, gynecology and obstetrics, emergency medicine where I performed various procedures like conducting normal vaginal deliveries, venesections, securing a central line, thoracotomy, suturing of lacerated wounds, securing an air way, performing emergency procedures like BLS, ACLS. My two month posting In the department of preventive and social medicine at Sir Ronald Ross institute of parasitology was very challenging where I got a chance to conduct descriptive and analytical field studies like case-control and cohort studies. I was trained in disaster management like the International four colored code system used for triage management, preforming screening for incidence and prevalence of infectious diseases in endemic regions.

After graduating in january 2012 from medical college of Soochow University, I was offered a position as house officer and on call emergency assistant at Omni hospitals ,one of India's leading private hospitals and my responsibilities include making rounds, diagnosing and treatment of infectious diseases and conducting health camps in villages and remote areas where medical facilities are limited, educating and bringing awareness about the Importance of public health by giving seminars at health camps conducted by national rural health mission in India.

Right now,Public health in India is comparatively under developed. The basic problem and the greatest drawback of health promotion effort is that people feel the need for health only when it is lost.Public health in India is remembered only when there is a major epidemic or disaster and forgotten soon after the event is over. There is a paucity for public health professionals in India and preponderance of doctors and health professionals are confined to urban settings. The advances of science and technology in diagnosis and treatment may have helped add years to life, but have not rendered the community, at large, healthier.There are 585 rural hospitals compared to 985 urban hospitals in the country. Out of the

6,39,729 doctors registered in India, only 67,576 are in the public sector. However, I trust there is great prospects for community health in India and a career in public health will be formidable, yet gratifying. Hence, there is a lot that can be done to develop the public health sector in India with knowledge acquired from the advances in public health in your prestigious country and university. An MPH program with concentration in epidemiology is the perfect course to start in public health as the extensive program will help build up research skills and statistical analysis which will help me to gain a sound knowledge in conducting research back in India right form residency.

The public health program at the university of georgia school of public health and advanced research opportunities will be a major contribution to my future goals and career. The thorough program at your school, the renowned faculty, academic excellence and my strong aspiration attracted me to take up public health program. The great words of Buddha " Your work is to discover your world and then, with all your heart give yourself to it", Inspired me the most and I discovered my world is to be a diligent health care provider and with a strong medical background, motivated to learn and contribute, I'm confident I'll do my best to it.
admission2012 - / 477 90  
Nov 15, 2012   #2
Hello,

Your essay is not as focused as it should be. It seems like you are giving the reader a health lesson. This should be your statement of purpose. Why you wish to study this subject and why now? I could only find one sentence which actually answered this question; "An MPH program with concentration in epidemiology is the perfect course to start in public health as the extensive program will help build up research skills and statistical analysis which will help me to gain a sound knowledge in conducting research back in India right form residency." Everything else that you wrote is pretty much fluff and is not really needed. Focus this essay on your past and future. Use the MPH to connect the two. Once you do this, the essay will flow naturally and there should be no problems with admissions. -AAO

Hope this helps.
OP karthik 2 / 3 1  
Nov 15, 2012   #3
Thank you. I think I'll be more natural this time and wii make necessary changes.


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