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Every movie made in a country can reflect some realities about that country


sevan_777 2 / 3  
Apr 24, 2014   #1
Would you please correct my mistakes?
Thanks in advance

Every movie made in a particular country can reflect some of the realities about that country; indeed, we can understand valuable information during watching a movie. In my point of view, during watching a film we can figure out some information such as the country climate, culture and etc.

First, we can see the country culture and traditions. In fact, it is tremendously easy to find out about some aspects of cultural behaviors in a movie. For example, when we are watching a picture made in Iran, we can understand that the vast majority of people are Muslims because all of the women wear scarfs and also we can not see someone is drinking alcohol beverage in movie. A separation, a movie which is made in Iran and won Oscar reward, is a quintessential of Iranian culture.

Second, we can realize information about the country climate and weather. For example, when a movie is made in Africa we can understand that it is a tropical country and weather is extremely hot because the people and also characters in the movie wear thin cloths. Or we can see that the movie is directed near an ocean or beach; as a result, we can make sure that the country is near ocean. The movie Grey is a clear example for a movie made in Canada because it is always covered by snow even in summer.

Last but not least, we can see whether the country is rich or poor. Besides, we can see how developed are the people. For example, a movie made in the USA is most likely to reflect reality about a country which is rich. Moreover, the cars used in the movie and also the buildings, which we can see during filming, indicate the fact that the country is wealthy. A movie made in Newyork will show us skyfalls and modern cars ;consequently, we conclude that the people of that region are rich.

To sum up, one of the best ways to realize some aspects about a country is watching a movie made in that country. Brilliant information such as culture and climate and also how rich or poor is a country can be understood.
xingshigang3030 2 / 1  
Apr 25, 2014   #2
we can see /it is easy to be seen / it can be easily identified that

for example/ for instance
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Apr 25, 2014   #3
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OP sevan_777 2 / 3  
Apr 25, 2014   #4
Thank you for informing me.
Itsyasmeens 2 / 10  
Apr 25, 2014   #5
For example, when we are watching a picture made in Iran.. The right form is: when we are watching a picture taken in Iran.

Starting a sentence using "Or" isn't the rightest thing so far

But everything else is totally right and written in a great form :)


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