Let's work on your intro thesis statement and followup paragraph answering the prompt:
Today business world is facing with challenges of downsizing big business, as well major reduction in the size of government. In a close future, creativity will be replacing the information and entrepreneurship will be a key foundation of future society.
Which do you mean to say in these sentences?
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Today's business world faces the challenge of downsizing
-Big business is faced with the challenge of downsizing
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Today's world is faced with the challenge of downsizing, both big business as well as government.
(BTW- The third is a fairly "loaded" statement which will require some convincing back-up.)
-In
a close the near future, creativity will be replacing
the information (WHAT INFORMATION?? NEED TO SPECIFY) and entrepreneurship will be a key foundation of future society. (THIS IS ALSO VAGUE: WHAT KIND OF FOUNDATION FOR WHAT FUTURE SOCIETY)
You might want to add something that makes this your opinion.
In this regard, entrepreneurship consultancy is one of my long term career objectives and IMEET programme serves me in two ways; first by concentrating on knowledge of didactics, pedagogy and learning process and the second entrepreneurship, innovation and creativity concepts.
(This follows from the last point...) Because of my strong belief in its importance, entrepreneurship consultancy is my long-term career objective. The IMEET program enables me to do this by...(WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY CONCENTRATING ON DIDACTICS etc. etc. - teach you how to teach entrepreneurship??? Use simpler language.)
Finding a common language to transfer my knowledge, teach and motivate other peoples as a consultant always has been one of my challenging and exciting issues. My experience to teach more than 150 insurance agents was a valuable experience to me. So IMEET programme will increase my skills and qualification in this arena.
From here, the rest of the essay sounds too much like paraphrasing a college catalog. Instead, why not write about what was most meaningful /valuable about your experience teaching 150 agents and why this led you to want to specialize in this field. What skills do you want to acquire? Why do you feel you would be able to motivate others as a consultant?