Please review the following LOR.

It gives me great pleasure to write this recommendation in favor of XXX.
We at XXX are mainly into the Software Development for finance sector and maintenance of our legacy software's.
During the interview process we were amazed by XXX strong aptitude and problem solving skills. Not just did he have a strong grasp of basics of what we do and that of the industry, but he also had a very clear goal and understanding of how he could contribute to our organization and what he sought to learn from us. Encouraged by fervor, clarity and his superlative record in one of the best engineering college of the state we offered him the opportunity to be the integral part of our team.
He has been working with a group of 6 people in developing our new product named 'WebTruste'. It is developed using ASP.Net, C#.Net, SQL Server 2005, Crystal Reports, JavaScript and Ajax. I understand from the head of the technology that XXX is exceptional in problem solving. His command over programming tools and ability to utilize them to meet the requirements is remarkable. I learned that his ability to absorb what is happening and grasp various angles, issues and parameters involved is absolutely outstanding. At both micro and macro levels he comprehends and is able to distinguish what will matter and why. For someone with so little experience in the field is remarkable.
The thing that impresses me the most about him is his discipline, positive attitude, hard working nature and never say die attitude. He is also constantly looking for new challenges, skill building and developing a resourceful network of colleagues that respect and admire him.
I applaud his decision to pursue graduate studies and his strong desire to take his dedication and skill to the next level. It is my belief that a stronger education will help Hardik to truly succeed in the industry. I heartily recommend him into your graduate program. I am confident that Hardik will both grow from and give back to your program.

Date: 1st October, 2009
Signature:
Name: Mr. Aniruddh Nagodara.
Designation: Managing Director
Company: Version Systems Pvt. Ltd.

Looks good, only thing I would reccomend is in:



This sentence seems to be lacking a subject to me. If you are referring to his achievements as remarkable I suggest:

...in the field this is ...

If you are referring to the person in general as remarkable I suggest:

... in the field he is....

Thank You ozric.... Your suggestions are welcomed

"Not just did he have a strong "

You might want to change it to "Not only.....but also" form

I would think you might want to give some specific examples of his achievement. The schools appreciate that a little more and may be couple of lines on what you think he should improve... or it would just come across as too good to be true.

Hope that helps.

thank you for the help