You don't actually specify your career objectives here. In all writing, detail makes the different. We read that you want a career in engineering -- a very broad field. Also, this could be assumed (I am guessing) from the nature of the job for which you are applying. You imply that you desire "professional growth," but again do not specify what you might mean by that.
What you want to do, if you are applying for a specific listed job, is list your objectives that are directly relevant to that job, such as developing a specific set of skills or working within a particular subset of the field.
If you are applying to the company, but not for a specific job, then you must be even more detailed, listing a number of objectives that are related to the various jobs you might do for that company. If you have a specific type of job in mind, say so.
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