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essay for internship with a business school Hi, I am BSc Maths hons student (although i have courses in maths, computers ( computer science can be used),...	1	Eha May 14, 2012, 05:07am	kandy_jalva Today, 01:17pm
Personal Statement for MPH Program - Concentration in Community/Global Health Thank you! The word limit is 1200 but I am still going to try to cut it short (hopefully). I...	5	ria_s May 15, 2012, 02:07pm	ria_s Yesterday, 08:03pm
PA School Narrative for the CASPA I am trying to write a person narrative for Physician Assistant School. The prompt is to describe your motivation towards...	0	Prydekn90 Yesterday, 08:15am	—
Hobbies, strenths, weaknesses - from India Personal Introduction paragraph It is fine but would be better if you make your introduction more diverse. For example:I love to listen...	2	Ravirajaputra May 14, 2012, 08:53am	goku123 Yesterday, 05:56am
'computing science, research, and knowledge' - review of my SOP thanx elena... :) Do i need to add anything else? How long should an ideal SOP be? this occupies...	2	timmy4all May 15, 2012, 03:49pm	timmy4all May 15, 2012, 09:47pm
(NYMC School of Health Sciences and Practice) - Personal Statement hey this is an example of how i stated my personal statement : start intro : One of my...	8	livda May 12, 2012, 02:22pm	earlise May 15, 2012, 07:58pm
benefit from studying in the public health program- conveying a solid point in my MPH For a rough draft, it's fine. From what I think, you still need good transitions from one topic to another....	2	vupwa Apr 25, 2012, 12:40pm	ria_s May 15, 2012, 02:24pm
'In touch with business development' - application for an evening MBA program I think you should start with "expand my understanding of the business environment as I work". I think that's more...	1	noraad2 May 12, 2012, 12:46pm	pinky44 May 14, 2012, 06:34pm
'Rewarding experience' - My dream of Becoming a Physical Therapist Thank you very much for the feedback! I will definitely be revising my essay :)	2	squinn2885 May 5, 2012, 06:50pm	squinn2885 May 13, 2012, 10:45am
'providing care and guidance' - Essay for Physician Assistant Program I don't have much grammatical advice to give, as I'm not an expert, however I can tell you that the...	5	Spatel Apr 18, 2012, 08:27pm	jduffucf89 May 11, 2012, 08:50am
Dr. Casper, your mouse is ready for dissection. Physician Assistant Program Statement This essay is nothing short of brilliant! You did a wonderful job of explaining the events that have led...	2	paulcasper Apr 26, 2012, 09:35pm	jduffucf89 May 11, 2012, 08:43am
Right focus, Master's of Public Policy, concentration in social policy Thank you so much!	2	mmarchev May 9, 2012, 01:33am	mmarchev May 10, 2012, 10:33am
Best approach to critical reflection essay structure (Master Level Business) Your instincts on how to do it will make for a good critical reflection. I wonder if "works cited" is...	1	edean May 1, 2012, 01:34pm	EF_Susan May 10, 2012, 10:01am
'working at a social service agency' - Social Work Admission Essay Wonderfully written. I felt like a participant in your adventure. At the moment, I can provided only corrections and commentary...	3	jmr84 May 1, 2012, 07:49pm	BachChaconne2 May 8, 2012, 10:34pm
Writing an essay for an Executive MPH Program! Hello BachChaconne2, Thank you for for you feedback! I really appreciate your comprehensive review and critique of my writing...	4	pfishermsw Apr 22, 2012, 06:30pm	pfishermsw May 7, 2012, 10:27pm
Personal Statement - Why do you want to be a PA - life decisions I agree with Ana. It is a very well written personal statement. The beginning caught my attention right away for...	2	Alvin123 May 4, 2012, 12:24pm	westway50 May 6, 2012, 09:38pm
'A Determined Pursuit of Peace' - Post-Grad Admission My first piece of advice is to strengthen (with some clarification) your opening statement. ...As an advisor I am currently...	1	ysane1 Apr 27, 2012, 02:23pm	EF_Susan May 2, 2012, 09:56pm
Statement of Purpose for MLIS (Library & Info Studies) Program at LIU Dear EF_Susan and Uju, thank you for your input. I did think of adding my reasons for choosing the particular...	3	marishkar Apr 22, 2012, 09:30pm	marishkar May 1, 2012, 08:39pm
Need Help to write SOP to change Biomedical Engineering to MS in Computer Science. First you need to check what the school you are applying to looks out for in your statement of purpose...	2	amol_fegade1985 Apr 19, 2012, 05:37am	Uju May 1, 2012, 08:37pm
Lighting a Path Through the Darkness - Peace Corps Essay #1 This is really good. It is clear and compelling! Good Luck!	3	Aevan1 Apr 29, 2012, 02:19pm	jmr84 May 1, 2012, 03:24pm
'to develop my knowledge' - statement of purpose for MSc in Telecommunication Thank You very much for you suggestion, Susan. Saif	2	saifulislam Apr 26, 2012, 09:31am	saifulislam Apr 26, 2012, 11:39am
'issues in Kyrgyzstan' - Statement of purpose in development studies Please describe a personal achievement (e.g. extracurricular activities, volunteer work, awards you have received, etc.) and explain why you think...	2	Tolgonai Apr 11, 2012, 06:45am	Tolgonai Apr 25, 2012, 04:02am
'Mechatronics Engineering' Statement of Purpose for Robotics Graduate Program "Discovery consists of seeing what everybody has seen and thinking what nobody has thought", as said by Albert Szent-Gyrgyi. Beautiful...	1	sohaib89 Apr 16, 2012, 05:29am	EF_Susan Apr 24, 2012, 01:37pm
'well-rounded diverse individual' - statement of purpose fashion Grad school at SCAD I really appreciate your kind words. You've just brightened my day! Muchisimas Gracias!	3	Amberly Lane Apr 17, 2012, 10:31pm	Amberly Lane Apr 19, 2012, 10:52am
'providing emotional and physical care to patients' - HELP WITH PA ESSAY I'm trying to tighten this up mostly. Hope it helps. topher1983: Ten different places called home in eighteen...	2	topher1983 Apr 18, 2012, 12:57pm	invot Apr 18, 2012, 09:05pm
'the essential features of the subjects I liked' PHD Economics - Statement of Purpose Hi Susan, thanks for the corrections!	2	aghonia Apr 16, 2012, 07:02am	aghonia Apr 18, 2012, 03:30pm
"public servitude and psychology" - SOP Master's of Public Administration Nice opening statement :)... Being a fifth grader, I was never was not able to fully comprehend the extent...	1	vbalang Apr 13, 2012, 03:01pm	EF_Susan Apr 16, 2012, 09:41pm
PhD Food Science SOP- My ultimate career goal one more thing, its honed, not horned!	3	karthik896 Apr 15, 2012, 06:38pm	Thors Hammer Apr 15, 2012, 08:13pm
Statement of Purpose for Graphic Design MFA at SCAD Thanks to both of you. That gave me a great place to start making corrections and shorten the length...	3	vonda Apr 3, 2012, 08:00am	vonda Apr 13, 2012, 04:03pm
cover letter of Quantitaive Marketing Masters I'm not an expert but one day a professor said to me that it's better don't use very and really....	2	lucy16 Apr 11, 2012, 08:19am	veronicamosquer Apr 12, 2012, 09:43pm
'preparing for this career' - Statement of Purpose - Grad. School in Education I continued the path in teaching students with disabilities as a Paraprofessional. I had accepted wider variety of roles than...	11	mclite77 Apr 6, 2012, 09:45pm	mclite77 Apr 12, 2012, 07:00pm
SOP Graduate school- Fashion Design and Society Since I was a teenage girl, I have been dreaming of ---(a career in?)---fashion, so I've tried to get all...	1	funnyg Apr 10, 2012, 08:06pm	EF_Susan Apr 12, 2012, 10:51am
sop for grad school-master's in finance My resolve to study finance was a direct consequence of the failure in business I experienced while in high school....	1	sol2 Apr 10, 2012, 11:02am	EF_Susan Apr 12, 2012, 10:39am
'eliminate the eminent/obvious bridge' - Admission to Public Health Graduate programs Within the first few months, I witnessed doctors and lawyers often undervaluing both my mother's and my mine and my...	1	arose211 Apr 11, 2012, 08:46pm	EF_Susan Apr 12, 2012, 08:12am
'Want to become a Professional Accountant' - Appeal letter / personal statement Umm. I don't know how to comment about this. Can you give some context? So this school you're applying for...	2	djskills Mar 27, 2012, 06:13pm	prc Apr 11, 2012, 07:23am
Philosophy on Education (experimental essay for submission) Greetings Susan, Thank you for taking the time to look at my essay above. Often, I forget...	2	mclite77 Apr 8, 2012, 05:19pm	mclite77 Apr 9, 2012, 02:51pm
Need help in making SOP for Postgraduate Diploma in Management first of all, think why do u need postgraduate in management? what point made u come to this decision? second,...	3	Monty Mar 25, 2012, 09:30am	alisher_93 Apr 9, 2012, 04:14am
SOP for Computational Engineering Masters Program in Germany Is there a particular guide line to write the SOP per school. Moderator, your edits are good. But...	4	bmrguru Apr 2, 2012, 12:16pm	mclite77 Apr 8, 2012, 11:23pm
'changed from being less ambitious to becoming more ambitious' (reasons for applying) This essay has a good hook in the beginning. My drive for success saw me through a rigorous...	3	ma_bankas Apr 6, 2012, 01:36pm	mclite77 Apr 8, 2012, 05:10pm
MPH Personal statement + Study/research objective (related essays?) Hi Pharmaaddict, Concentrate with one topic. Choose the one you have more connecting information or specifics that had...	3	Pharmaddict Apr 5, 2012, 06:26pm	mclite77 Apr 7, 2012, 08:36pm
Statement MSc - Master in Financial Mathematics program Thank you :)	2	kelyos Mar 26, 2012, 05:43am	kelyos Apr 7, 2012, 03:46pm
What led you to select your program (Computer Science ) at our university ? Hi, ya , it is, and much demanding too,	11	zogi maral Mar 29, 2012, 05:24am	zogi maral Apr 5, 2012, 06:29pm
Personal Statement for Grad School Global Health Thanks for the feedback Susan! I definitely tend to make my sentences a bit lengthy, so I'll work on editing...	2	ambL31 Apr 1, 2012, 05:31pm	ambL31 Apr 5, 2012, 05:33pm
Comments on Personal Statement for MRes in Biosciences I see where you're coming from. I put "hopefully" because I didn't want to sound naive, especially with my limited...	4	surrealle Apr 3, 2012, 09:15pm	surrealle Apr 4, 2012, 11:55am
"Mr. Mountain's classroom" - someone who has made an impact on your life Thanks so much for the help, words can not explain how helpful you guys have been!	3	slurpee777 Apr 3, 2012, 10:57am	slurpee777 Apr 4, 2012, 12:08am
Personal Statement for applying to PA school: engineer to paramedic to PA I've learned the answers to these questions and many more questions by observing people at work and continuing to ask...	1	mtnmedic Mar 30, 2012, 08:27am	EF_Susan Apr 2, 2012, 08:13pm
Statement of Purpose for SCAD (M of A in Historic Preservation) After At that point in my life I began to get involved in the art program at my high school...	1	samanastasio Mar 28, 2012, 09:02pm	EF_Susan Apr 2, 2012, 10:52am
Essay about switching careers and applying to a Post Bacc PreMed Program -feedback Hello, I believe your essay demonstrates your mature passion and dedication to this field. You have done a marvelous...	1	A1MBand Mar 28, 2012, 06:43am	lak23 Apr 1, 2012, 09:31pm
"Living In the Oldest City In The World"-SOP Master in Architecture Ok sounds goods Yamen.	13	yamenkh Mar 23, 2012, 01:06pm	chalumeau Mar 31, 2012, 08:58am
UIUC MS FINANCE Essay (Economics, Finance and Accounting Classes) Thank you for the suggestions!	2	aa11 Mar 14, 2012, 03:38pm	aa11 Mar 29, 2012, 05:37pm
'Nursing in today's healthcare system' - Graduate Nursing Program Thank you so much for the feedback.	2	MichSaw Mar 26, 2012, 11:24pm	MichSaw Mar 28, 2012, 09:09pm
'increase the diversity of class' - personal statement for Master of Public Health It's very good! I liked it. Actually got me interested about a public health program. This essay could be...	1	cakecat Mar 26, 2012, 04:56pm	joonghoon5 Mar 28, 2012, 08:02pm
SOP of masters in responsible management and sustainable economic development These experiences inspired and motivated me to work for upliftment and the betterment of the poor and marginalized communities. Farmers...	30	rohitkumar31088 Mar 21, 2012, 12:20pm	chalumeau Mar 28, 2012, 01:08pm
Short Explanation of Low GPA While many consider passion to be a virtue while pursuing higher education, irony saw my situation--I'm sure if this is...	1	JsunH Mar 26, 2012, 03:16pm	EF_Susan Mar 27, 2012, 10:01pm
Essay for describing academic experience to depict depth of knowledge My academic experience had been a mixed bag in terms of knowledge, and the variety of subjects I have studied...	1	sachingupta Mar 22, 2012, 04:26am	EF_Susan Mar 27, 2012, 08:37pm
'Occupational Health and Safety personnel shortage' - Master of Public Health SOP If I were you I would include a stronger introductory statement; this appears to start in the middle of a...	1	pdube Mar 15, 2012, 11:09am	EF_Susan Mar 26, 2012, 10:16pm
'orientation towards engineering' - admission to Engineering Management program Thanks Jenny. Corrections noted and hope rest of the statement is good to go.	2	Gaurav Singh Mar 10, 2012, 10:59pm	Gaurav Singh Mar 26, 2012, 10:49am
Application to comparative politics and markets, 2nd choice political theory.. Oh wow, Chalumeau you have truly helped me out and gave me a lot of ideas :) Thank you!!! I...	2	Darja8 Mar 24, 2012, 08:37am	Darja8 Mar 24, 2012, 01:23pm
Essay for an internship application (things about me / good fit / dream job / ads) "We are not afraid of taking risks or not afraid of failure because there are worse things than failure.."...	4	TarlGis Mar 22, 2012, 07:10pm	meandstudying Mar 24, 2012, 05:45am
Help needed regarding statement of purpose for post graduate diploma in telecom Due to some financial problems I could not continue my studies, moreover I was promised a good position in my...	2	aimkhan2 Mar 21, 2012, 09:51am	aimkhan2 Mar 24, 2012, 02:51am

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