When I was
a kid I was curious about how ants followed
a path without getting lost.
It was during my Undergraduate final year project when I came across this interesting 'Ant colony algorithm' I realized that, there exists highly creative new technological design
Except the word "ant" I can't see how your childhood experience relates to whatever you have written afterward....it was only after this event
didthat my desire to explore greater...
During my bachelors, the courses which held my interest the most were Design and Analysis of Algorithms, Compiler construction, and Operating Systems .
It would be better if you add a phrase or two on why you liked those courses.
overall first class along with
a campus placement at Infosys Technologies
I
won't be able to
do work on technology of my liking in a service based company.
^^Avoid contractions.
So instead I joined a
start-up (
a hyphen is needed) where
along with (
"along with" are two words)
with working on small projects
I prepared for GRE alongwith my tight work schedule and without taking any extra preparatory leaves.
This is not a very impressive thing to say.