Being a physician for more than seven years taught me how caring about patients can change the
perspective on life in a dramatic way. -- I made a change here based on my own ideas. I don't think preceptivity is a real word. Also, I don't think dramatically rich is a good term. Just say "rich" or "dramatic" or "drastic."
I don't understand why you are trying to be a physician assistant if you are already a physician....
verb tense...came to the conclusion that Tom had
advanced pancreatic cancer with metastasis to Esophagus and liver.
After several meetings
with group of surgeons and radiologists, we came across a palliative surgery without any chance to cure the cancer.
Several supportive and professional meetings were held
to educate Tom about the fact that
surgery will just suppress the symptoms for a short period of time. Tom started losing ...
After surgery he start regained 45 pounds of weight that he had lost over several weeks.
Thank you in advance for giving me this opportunity to
present my dream goal!
express my interest in your excellent program.