Overall your essay is good. I have made few minor changes, please review these.
I feel that the two subjects combine well with one another;
and on many occasions,
I have found that my knowledge of one has helped me with the other.
like book-keeping, I found
to be more attractive.
Now, I have a full-time job in a firm, (Better put a comma here) which is the brand of Grant Thornton International.
This is an interesting career (Remove comma) because we
get an opportunity to work with different kind of people where we can learn from each-other and synergize our efforts towards a greater team performace.
Auditing in different companies(such as some petrolium companies,Persian bank,Persian leasing company,NPC brands,...)
have given me the chance to be familiar
be familiar with a number of
This is a professional career that allowed me to obtain the ability to effectively analyze accounting records,interpret financial statements as well as
it helped me to acquire a wide overview regarding management functions within an organization.
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My main ambition is to become a chartered accountant after I finish my degree in the university.I am hoping university will provide me with insight in to the accounting world as well as offering me a wide range of choices and connections after my course.
I believe Sweden universities are the best in accounting with a lot of publications and modern facilities.I have thoroughly enjoyed Swedish universities and beileve this is the next step for me.College and full-time job have changed me as a person.They have given me greater sense of independence and success.I think that college has really made me grow and has introduced me to a wider range of people.I am much more open-minded and am now a better team player as I have learnt to listen to others and take in their opinions.I think that Sweden is more cultural country than others and I can show my talents there and also enhance my knowledge.