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Dec 11, 2010, 07:29am   #1
The way I think of accounting is that it is a fundamental part of our way of life.This is,because I believe that every in the world uses the principles of accounting at list ones in their lives.It can be things that they do in their daily life,for example,checking how much money they have with them,or how much money they have spent,or they use in the businesses and large-scale transactions where it is comonly known.

During the four years of my undergraduate study,I have taken numerous courses in tax,accounting,finance,auditing and business administration.Having exelled in my exams,I can proudly say that I posses the skills that will lead me to university.Taking a variety of subjects in university enabled me to see where my interests and strengths lie.The course that grabbed my attention in the university were auditing and financial accounting.I feel that the two subjects combine well with one another and on my occasions I have found that my knowledge of one has helped me with the other.
In july 2008,I started my first job as an accountant in a company.Through this job,I have understood the important role played by the accountancy in business.

Definitely book-keeping,preparing finacial statements,stablishing and maintaining accurate financial records provide a general overview of how business is doing.Although I liked book-keeping I found that auditing is more attractive.Now I have a full-time job in a firm which is the brand of Grant Thornton International.I am working as an auditor in many companies.This is an interesting career,because you are working with different people and also you can show your team-work abilities and understand the advantages of that.

Auditing in different companies(such as some petrolium companies,Persian bank,Persian leasing company,NPC brands,...)I got the chance to be familiar with a number of softwares used to facilitate accounting procedure.This is a professional career that allowed me to obtain the ability to effectively analyze accounting records,interpret financial statements as well as acquired a wide overview regarding management functions within an organization.
My main ambition in the future is to become a chartered accountant after I finish my degree in the university.I can hoping university will provide me with an insight of accounting world as well as offering me a wide range of choices and connections after my course.

I know Sweden universities has the best universities in accounting with a lot of publications and modern facilities.I have thoughly enjoyed Swedish universities and beileve this is the next step for me.College and full-time job have changed me as a person.They have given me greater sense of independence and success.I think that college has really made me grow and has introduced me to a wider range of people.I am much more open-minded and am now a better team player as I have learnt to listen to others and take in their opinions.I think that Sweden is more cultural country than others and I can show my talents there and also enhance my knowledge.
Dec 14, 2010, 06:23pm   #2
The way I think of accounting is that it is a fundamental part of our way of life.This---Don't forget to leave a space after each sentence and comma.


...is,because I believe that everyone in the world uses the principles of accounting at least once in their lives. It can...

...or they use in the businesses and large-scale transactions where it is commonly known.

I feel that the two subjects combine well with one another and on many occasions I have found that my knowledge of one has helped me with the other.

In July 2008,---always capitalize months.

I started my first job as an accountant in a company.Through this job,I have understood the important role played by the accountant in any business.

Definitely book-keeping, preparing financial statements,establishing and maintaining accurate financial...

My main ambition in the future is to become a chartered accountant after I finish my degree in the university.

I am hoping university will provide me with an insight into the accounting world as well as offering me a wide range of choices and connections after my course.

I believe Sweden universities are the best universities in accounting with a lot of publications and modern facilities.

I have thoroughly enjoyed Swedish universities and believe this is the next step for me.

Good luck in school and have fun!
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Dec 18, 2010, 11:51am   #3
You want to improve the flow of your essay, and a good way to do this is by combining sentences into more eloquent, fluid phrasings. To demonstrate this, I have revised your opening sentence to read as follows:

"Accounting is a fundamental part of our way of life, as people in every corner of the world -- subconsciously or consciously -- use the principles of accounting in their personal and professional lives."

Sincerely,
Martin F.
Harvard Sq. Essays Editor
Dec 24, 2010, 12:10am   #4
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SOP(applying in master of accounting in sweden universities) plz correct

"Accounting is a fundamental part of our way of life, as people in every corner of the world -subconsciously or consciously- use the principles of accounting in their personal and professional lives." It can be things that they do in their daily life,for example,checking how much money they have with them,or how much money they have spent,or they use in the businesses and large-scale transactions where it is commonly known.

During the four years of my undergraduate study,I have taken numerous courses in tax,accounting,finance,auditing and business administration.Having exelled in my exams,I can proudly say that I posses the skills that will lead me to university.Taking a variety of subjects in university enabled me to see where my interests and strengths lie.The course that grabbed my attention in the university were auditing and financial accounting.I feel that the two subjects combine well with one another and on many occasions I have found that my knowledge of one has helped me with the other.

In July 2008,I started my first job as an accountant in a company.Through this job,I have understood the important role played by the accountant in any business.Definitely book-keeping,preparing financial statements,establishing and maintaining accurate financial records provide a general overview of how business is doing.Although I liked book-keeping I found that auditing is more attractive.Now I have a full-time job in a firm which is the brand of Grant Thornton International.I am working as an auditor in many companies.This is an interesting career,because you are working with different people and also you can show your team-work abilities and understand the advantages of that.

Auditing in different companies(such as some petrolium companies,Persian bank,Persian leasing company,NPC brands,...)I got the chance to be familiar with a number of softwares used to facilitate accounting procedure.This is a professional career that allowed me to obtain the ability to effectively analyze accounting records,interpret financial statements as well as acquired a wide overview regarding management functions within an organization.
My main ambition is to become a chartered accountant after I finish my degree in the university.I am hoping university will provide me with insight in to the accounting world as well as offering me a wide range of choices and connections after my course.

I believe Sweden universities are the best in accounting with a lot of publications and modern facilities.I have thoroughly enjoyed Swedish universities and beileve this is the next step for me.College and full-time job have changed me as a person.They have given me greater sense of independence and success.I think that college has really made me grow and has introduced me to a wider range of people.I am much more open-minded and am now a better team player as I have learnt to listen to others and take in their opinions.I think that Sweden is more cultural country than others and I can show my talents there and also enhance my knowledge.
Dear Farmia,

Overall your essay is good. I have made few minor changes, please review these.

I feel that the two subjects combine well with one another; and on many occasions, I have found that my knowledge of one has helped me with the other.


Although I liked like book-keeping, I found that auditing is to be more attractive.

Now, I have a full-time job in a firm, (Better put a comma here) which is the brand of Grant Thornton International.

This is an interesting career (Remove comma) because we are working get an opportunity to work with different kind of people where we can learn from each-other and synergize our efforts towards a greater team performace.

Auditing in different companies(such as some petrolium companies,Persian bank,Persian leasing company,NPC brands,...)I got have given me the chance to be familiar

be familiar with a number of softwares software

This is a professional career that allowed me to obtain the ability to effectively analyze accounting records,interpret financial statements as well as acquired it helped me to acquire a wide overview regarding management functions within an organization.


Last two paragraph, you need to modify. Its flow is not good. Please, work on it. -

My main ambition is to become a chartered accountant after I finish my degree in the university.I am hoping university will provide me with insight in to the accounting world as well as offering me a wide range of choices and connections after my course.

I believe Sweden universities are the best in accounting with a lot of publications and modern facilities.I have thoroughly enjoyed Swedish universities and beileve this is the next step for me.College and full-time job have changed me as a person.They have given me greater sense of independence and success.I think that college has really made me grow and has introduced me to a wider range of people.I am much more open-minded and am now a better team player as I have learnt to listen to others and take in their opinions.I think that Sweden is more cultural country than others and I can show my talents there and also enhance my knowledge.

Thanks!!!



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