Hi, vmath. I'll help with parts of your essay.______________________________
I was always fascinated to know how the characters that we type on the keyboard were interpreted making the computer do interesting things.
I was always
fascinated to knowinterested in understanding how the characters that we type on the keyboard
were interpreted makingmade the computer do interesting things.
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Eventually I was introduced to JAVA in class 7th .To further this interest, in class 11th I opted for Mathematics with Computer Science where I learnt C++ and basic concepts of Object Oriented Programming.
I'm not familiar with "class 7th" and "class 11th." My guess is you mean 7th and 11th grades. Here is how I would write these sentences:Eventually I was introduced to JAVA in
class 7th7th grade .To further this interest, in
class 11th11th grade, I
opted fortook Mathematics with Computer Science
, where I
learntlearned the C++
language and basic concepts of Object Oriented Programming.
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I secured 90% marks in Computers in both class 10th and class 12th.
I
securedearned a 90%
marks in
Computerscomputer class in both
class 10th and class 12th10th and 12th grades. .
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The highly competitive environment in my school stimulated me intellectually, and made me participate in most of the computer science competitions viz : . In QUANTA (international annual school festival where I got my first global international exposure).
I'm not sure what you meant by "viz." Is that an abbreviation for something? I would leave if off unless you can clarify its meaning. I'll assume that you meant the second sentence fragment to be connected to the first sentence. Here's how I would write this sentence:The highly competitive environment
inat my school stimulated me intellectually,
and madeleading me
to participate in most of the computer science competitions
viz : Insuch as QUANTA (
an international
, annual school festival where I got my first global
international exposure).
What do you mean by "first global international exposure?" You became well known around the world? You became acquainted with people from around the world who also love computing? This is unclear and should be clarified. Here are two ways to write this:...annual school festival where I
first became known globally for my computing skills .
or.....annual school festival where I
first met other computer enthusiasts from around the world.__________________________________
I hope that has helped you a little :)